Reviews for All That You Can't Leave Behind
Susy A chapter 7 . 9/11/2010
aaauuuuuhhhhhh this fanfic is so adorable i absolutely adore the idea of making syaoran jeaulous with that other guy ( i 4got the name hehehehe) n the part where syaoran 4got his memeories of sakura! tat must be so heart-braking 4 her n especially when he 4got his memories of sakura when he just told her how he felt im putting u as #6 on my fanfic list3
rosedreamer101 chapter 7 . 12/16/2009
aw thats so cute! i love how you rushed through it, simple cute and not so much drama, like all the others. urg. anyways, note: when you were saying "nerves" i think you meant nervous. haha
Nefer Ahmose chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Absolutely fabulous! - It almost made me cry, so you know it has to be good! This story is totally great, especially since it's your first one! I hope to see more from you in the future! -
CaroAmy chapter 7 . 11/8/2009
Very sweet and heart warming.
AnimeLady04 chapter 7 . 10/22/2009
Sweet story! I enjoyed it! Great job
Jessicha Therese chapter 3 . 7/10/2009
My review will be composed of two parts.

The first one will be for Chapter 2. So, here it goes.

Your way of expressing words awed me for it gave definite details to the instances contained in the chapter. But, I pondered about something in this Chapter 2. 'What exactly happened?', 'What event took place in the penguin park?' 'Was it the cracking of Syaoran's head that Sakura heard?(Or am I just being silly?'-those were just some of the inquires that spun on my head. I liked all the statements Sakura worded out and her actions seemed reasonable in regards of what might had happened before. And hey! Why was Syaoran so angry? All in all, Chapter two deserved a thumbs-up!:D

For Chapter Three!

I knew right away that it was Syaoran who was the 'returning' student.

I would just like to point out a mistake.

"...Every mussel in my body seemed to tense."...

-Every muscle in my body seemed to tense.-

Showing Sakura's feelings was a good move. It was for us to really feel what she was feeling. That is a good factor because readers should somehow feel that they are IN the story.

"..."Hi Sakura." My head jerks up as I hear his voice. Did he really just talk to me, or am I just going insane?.."

-Haha! My own heart jumped from its place with this.-

I would have been as bewildered as Sakura noticing how strange Syaoran's action was. Once again, great work at fabricating the words and sentences.

Yes! I finally know something about what happened during the summer!

"...As I sat there watching is face.."

-As I sat there watching HIS face.-

And God! I love the ending sentence. Shocks!
Jessicha Therese chapter 2 . 7/9/2009
This is a nice read and I'm going to continue reading chapters 2-7 tomorrow, I think. It's just too bad that I have a lot to do. But I want to tell you that I loved the way you wrote this. :D
Jessicha Therese chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
I found this story in a community and attracted by the plot, I checked it out. This review will be for this prologue. I loved the way you expressed the details about her feelings. It's nice that you showed some conflict with oneself there (the part where she asked herself why she didn't accept his love).

And the last sentence struck me.

"...I can still remember the way it sounded, that piercing crack as Shaoran Li fell onto the pavement..."

-I don't know but somehow, this line caught me motionless. And it gave the opportunity to imagine how or what are the events surrounding that instant.
EndlessSugar chapter 7 . 6/18/2009
This story is really good I would like to see your future stories too

I'm so happy that everyone is happy
gonegonegone12345 chapter 5 . 6/16/2009
good story :3 I can't wait to read more!
luv animemanga forever chapter 3 . 6/15/2009
A very interesting story, although there were some gramma problem. But that's okay, it still a good story.