Reviews for Light in the Darkness
Guest chapter 28 . 3/15
Fucking idiot no an
Guest chapter 33 . 12/17/2013
I don't get it? Why would Bella leave Emmett for weeks? Makes Zero sense. Then there is this whole thing about Alice yelling about being grounded and Jasper yelling at her for talking badly to their Mother. You do understand that Alice and Jasper joined this Coven of vampires. Carlisle and Esme are not their adoptive parents. That is just roles they play to appear like a family to humans.
Guest chapter 20 . 12/17/2013
Really good chapter!
Guest chapter 18 . 12/17/2013
I really do like the story. I just have a hard time with Emmett, Jasper and Alice being grounded. I mean they are 100 year old vampires. They are only posing as Carlisle and Esme's children. Again I like the story ... I just wish you wouldn't make them all so childish.
guest chapter 12 . 12/17/2013
Oh my God ... Bella is so pathetic. I hope she dies in this story. Why is she calling Carlisle and Esme "Daddy" and "Mommy"? Its like she 4 years old. Plus, she's only known them for a couple years. Weird. Doesn't she have her own parents?
babesbraves chapter 32 . 10/1/2013
Please finish this epic work of yours it's too good to waste!
Kelbesmiles chapter 33 . 8/26/2013
Please update and finish the story! Love it! :)
catjumped1 chapter 33 . 7/11/2013
Not a bad story, I'd love to see how it turns out.
KristyB26 chapter 33 . 7/5/2013
Great story! Can't wait for next update! As far as the hurtful emails screw them. You can't please everyone and if they don't like it they should stop reading.
Liz 1974 chapter 33 . 6/8/2013
well BELIEVE ME WHEN I SAY I LO(VED UR STORY I write ff & I have got many PM saying I messed them up by one reason or another I never clamed to be a PERFECT writer & have a long time to get them right I could care less what they say I am a Creative writer not a full thinker so to speak I write a bunch at a time & let it flow as it may I hated English in school but loved to read books & write if they can't appreciate ur work then they don't have to read them RIGHT I hope when u come back to this story I will have the privilege to read it I will be adding u to my long list of fav ff & follow u don't be so down hearted they r RETARDED to think ur work is CRAP :)
Liz 1974 chapter 11 . 6/8/2013
ok I normally review after I get done w/ the story so I will just say OMG LOL u will get a better review when I am done & yes it won't take me that long I started this at noon PST today & will have it done before to long Sunday most likely
Mist17 chapter 33 . 3/14/2013
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!
babesbraves chapter 33 . 3/9/2013
Please finish it's too good not to, you weave a fantastic story don't let some silly troll get you down as you rock!
Ca.zaphira chapter 33 . 3/5/2013
Really enoy the story so far. I see it's been a while since any updates, and hope you get back into writting again. Looking forward to any updates.
beckylovestwilight chapter 33 . 2/27/2013
love it and cant wait for the next chapter xxx
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