omg! i was not listening to the song you told me but listening to something else. the song i was listening to is called

Ni Bu Zhi Dao De Shi by Lee Hom Wang/Wang Lee Hom

it was soo good! i loved this! awwwz

omg omg omg omg omg! so crazy! paul comes out of nowhere and shows himself to dawn, about time..."STALKER"

Everything in this story was overall perfect. Their wasn't much OOC and if their was it was for the story, your grammer was AMAZING (lol I sound like a nerd),sentence structure was great, and I could see most of it clearly in my head. I loved this story so much that I'm actually going to read it twice, TWICE, and I NEVER read fan fictions twice unless it's really really REALLY good and this fan fiction was outstanding. I honestly hope you do make more Paul and Dawn fan fictions because, for the thousanth time, this story is amazing. Plus, this is only your second fan fiction, I can't wait for the next one! If this is only your second one and your already writing amazing stories as this, then I bet future stories will be so great that the awesomness is something you just can't describe. This is also kind of a long review for me to type and that means something as well. Anyway, take care and please write some more!

That was so cute what Paul did, it was very creative of you. I love this story XD

Misty is in perfect character. And I love the mystery, I hope you make more mystery/romance ones or vice versa for Dawn and Paul because this is so good XD

This is onlyt your second one? I would have never guessed honestly, it's so good so far, I'm so excited about reading the next chapter! Oh yeah and please make more Dawn and Paul fanfictions :)

aw..it's so cute

so cute :D and really good chapter :D

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love the story. i think you should make a sequal.

Super OOC but really cute!

It was very fluffy, and quite cute! I liked the idea of Dawn being saved by a mystery person!

Paul was kind of OOC but, oh well, not like anyone can make him do things like that with him in character!

Keep Writing!

I think this was a great story. I love the ending chapter. GO PAUL! GO DAWN

I didn't expect that Paul was the mistery person at all. What a surprise. You stoory is going really good. I like it. Keep writing class chapters.

I like your first chapter even though I don'T know much about pokemon, its cool. That Misty girl is stupid. I wouldn't mind if my friend hangs out with another girl and they are just friends.

So-so start, but are you including Digimon? There is a Pokemon only section in the Games category, if you weren't aware. Plus, you seem to rush this a bit too fast. Add detail.