|Reviews for Shades of Grey|
| Prongs Uchiha chapter 5 . 7/7/2011
great story so far (i'll finish it in a minute, just this is bugging me)
Kyuubi is only the 9 tailed beast within Naruto. the eight tailed beast is called Hachibi.
the group of beasts in general, if you want to say something like "the 'beast'" is called Bijuu.
the cells (people that are the keeping the Bijuu inside them) are Jinchuriki. I'd say dont get Jinchuriki confussed with Bijuu, they are completely different things.
say like "the Bijuu stirred within its Jinchuriki" is the same as "Kyuubi stirred within Naruto"
if you don't believe me, check: .
just somce creative criticism :) great story :)
| White Maid chapter 10 . 1/30/2011
Very nice story. It kicked butt. XD
| SilverMistKunoichi chapter 10 . 1/3/2010
Aww very cute! :))
| KuroTenshiAkuma chapter 2 . 12/22/2009
um.. at the end there you used the word ronin.
Ronin are samuri that arent loyal to any higher power such as a shogun or any other authority.
| yoyos12 chapter 10 . 12/20/2009
awesome stroy! i wonder what happened to sasuke...
will there be a sequel?
| rikoxriko chapter 10 . 9/19/2009
omg, so cute.
I loved it. 3
No! Juugo! D:
| pet-of-love chapter 5 . 9/11/2009
a great story so far, really loking forward to reading the rest. just a littlr pointer though, the kyuubi is the 'demon fox' where as killer be is the jinchuriki of the demon ox... other then that i have no complaints lol. keep righting cause this is kwl and i like ur OC :)
| AngelsColdFire chapter 8 . 8/27/2009
dun dun dun! and off to battle they go! charge!
| katarauchiha653719 chapter 7 . 8/2/2009
keep up the great work!
hope to hear from you soon! :)
| AngelsFireNIce chapter 6 . 7/20/2009
wow, youki knows hinata? it is hinata, right? any way, good job with the story!
| katarauchiha653719 chapter 6 . 7/19/2009
i can't wait until you update again! :)
definitely something to look forward to!
| angfnf chapter 6 . 7/19/2009
I love the whole story! the characters aren't ooc and youki is so cool! Wish I could be a seer,too, but oh well! Keep up the good work! :-D
| Champion of Justice chapter 6 . 7/18/2009
Awsome chapter. I can't wait for the next one. please update soon.
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Hey! Loving the story, please keep up the great work! I have to say, the ending of chapter four was so sweet - I read it about ten times 3 One thing, though - the demons aren't called kyuubis - that's the name of the nine-tailed fox - they're called jinchuuriki. Sorry if that's kinda off topic. Please post soon!
| akatsukigirl1230 chapter 4 . 7/4/2009
Aw cute chapter ending! Is Kisame really jealous? Can he even be jealous? He seemed really polite to me, that is in the manga anyway. Have you seen the new Naruto shippuden episodes? Suigetsu is so cute in anime form! Anyway, love the chapter!