Reviews for The Ex Factor: Outtakes
JustSu chapter 7 . 11/22/2011
This is one of the saddest things I've read in a long time. I'm reading The Ex-F and at the end of chapter 28 your A/N sent me to these Outtakes. I could'n read the two first completely, I jumped the lemons. I can't stand these characters with a different one each other but I wanted to know what Edward's frame of mind was. So my reading has been... odd at the very least. Not your fault but mine. I'm always torn on what to do in these kind of situations, To Read or Not To Read? LOL

Thank you for writing but now excuse me because I have a honeymoon to read ;)

See you later.
bellastew chapter 7 . 7/14/2011
Great chapter... Really said... It could have been a fic all by itself!

Could you clarify to me on the paralells? O got the Tanya one, but not the hug one or the others...
bellastew chapter 6 . 7/14/2011
I liked that OT! I was afraid to read it, thinking it would be kind o weird with them, but it wasn't... Specially reading ot 6 where we learn that emmett felt sth even back then...
bellastew chapter 8 . 7/14/2011
Loved this outtake! So beautiful...
bellastew chapter 5 . 7/12/2011
OMG I Absofreakinglutely loved Splendor POV! I've been postponing reading it for a while but now that I did...

"Shouldn't have left her on the floor.

Yeah. Whatever"

LOL Besides being really funny, was also a good perpective on Edward life then...

Congrats SuzyQ and Angel!
Trickster22084 chapter 5 . 6/25/2011
Loved this chapter, shouldnt have left it on the floor yeah what ever I loved that I chuckled every time
Bethanne394 chapter 5 . 5/25/2011
I just loved this chapter! Not only do you get to hear about Edwards frame of mind the few months and weeks before he and Bella are reunited in such and open and refreshing way, but it is seen through the innocent eyes of his new puppy. It was sweet and cute and a completely adorable way to tell of Edwards final days of suffering alone in his heartache even if he hides it from others as well as he can but reveals all to his most unconditional supporters, his beloved pets. And the repeated phrase "shouldn't have left it on the floor" in all it's variations was brilliant and a humorous tie between each of the sections of Spendor's narrative.
Edward Mason Cullen chapter 9 . 5/22/2011
Good chapter. Will there be a #10?
satineRiP16 chapter 5 . 4/5/2011
OMG! i enjoyed this chapter very much! U have NO idea! Love it!
nessiecullen1995 chapter 9 . 3/31/2011
you really rock:) love this chapt. so much;)
CassandraLowery chapter 9 . 3/3/2011
The Mission Impossible stuff was sooooo cute! :)
CassandraLowery chapter 5 . 3/3/2011
I love the idea of writing from Spendor's POV-adorable and poignant!

You have done such an incredible job with TEF-it's amazing!

I can't wait for the sequel...when you have the time and the energy to invest in it. I know how writing goes...sometimes the best things have to percolate, trickle down, etc., before you can tackle them. So keep percolating and enjoy your hiatus!

-Cassandra :)
Guest chapter 5 . 1/25/2011
That was an amazing chapter. I loved the reading Spendor's POV. Very well written and very ejoyable.
Cullenfan524 chapter 5 . 11/8/2010
OMG! This was so good! I loved that it was in Spendor's POV! I loved hearing all these little secrets he never told Alice!
Charlotta chapter 8 . 10/2/2010
I just loved to read this chapter.

The true love feeling is perfect written. I feel so sorry for them not telling each other that they really really love each other.
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