Reviews for The Ex Factor: Outtakes
abbey c chapter 9 . 4/18/2012
You are the most amazing fanfic writer in all of history! I have been reading fanfic for 2 years and this story was HANDS DOWN the best ever! OMG you could get this published! PLEASE PLease publish the sequel PLEASE! I am only 13 and yet I need more of this story than I do oxygen! Its amazing! Please I beg you to publish the sequel! Publish the sequel! PLEASE! I love u Angela! Please publish the sequel! Ignore the idiots that say fucking crap about u I don't care how long it takes you to update just publish the sequel please! I need to read more please!
louanne61 chapter 8 . 1/14/2012
Another great chapter it's so sweet the way they are together I wish they could of stayed that way. But we would of never of got the great story of the Ex factor if they had xx
louanne61 chapter 7 . 1/14/2012
I really love this chapter Edward is trying so hard to put things right why does she have to be so stubborn. But yet again I hate Tanya
louanne61 chapter 4 . 1/14/2012
Why could'nt she just be honest with him and save all this hurt. He has made the first move even though he could only do it when he is drunk. I find that people are more honest when there drunk.
louanne61 chapter 3 . 1/14/2012
I think that Bella should of taken his apology it is obvious he is sorry so why could'nt she see that. I love how you have shown how he messes up because of his pain xx
louanne61 chapter 2 . 1/14/2012
Don't you think that Ryan has taken Bella drunken state to get what he wants. It's kind of worries me. Plus when you think of the whole rape thing is it her way of coping with that.
louanne61 chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
I'm really not sure about this chapter I really feel Edwards pain.

But he seems more affectionate to Amiee than I thought he would be or maybe I'm not reading it in the right way. But he calls her sweetheart a name he calls Bella. But I feel for his breakdown and him missing Bella so much.
MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
I'm not going to say that I'm not "appalled" by him, Her and this chapter. But the thing that's weirdest to me is his inability to have male FRIEDNS! The guys he's acquitted with but the women are "his best friends"? What's up with that?
JMaire chapter 7 . 12/12/2011
Eh. I hate Edward in this chapter. Blaming Bella for everything and refusing to take any responsibility for his actions. Cheating on Bella, then telling her he wants her back... no, wait, he doesn't... no, wait, he does...

EDWARD needed to grow up more than Bella did.
louanne61 chapter 5 . 12/5/2011
I loved this outtake. You could see how sad Edward was and how he was finding it so hard. I loved the should'nt of left it on the floor what ever. Now I no what my 2 dogs must think when they chew or in jacks case lays on anything that is left on the floor. xx
BrookeValerio chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Love it. Still. Rereading again!
JustSu chapter 7 . 11/22/2011
This is one of the saddest things I've read in a long time. I'm reading The Ex-F and at the end of chapter 28 your A/N sent me to these Outtakes. I could'n read the two first completely, I jumped the lemons. I can't stand these characters with a different one each other but I wanted to know what Edward's frame of mind was. So my reading has been... odd at the very least. Not your fault but mine. I'm always torn on what to do in these kind of situations, To Read or Not To Read? LOL

Thank you for writing but now excuse me because I have a honeymoon to read ;)

See you later.
bellastew chapter 7 . 7/14/2011
Great chapter... Really said... It could have been a fic all by itself!

Could you clarify to me on the paralells? O got the Tanya one, but not the hug one or the others...
bellastew chapter 6 . 7/14/2011
I liked that OT! I was afraid to read it, thinking it would be kind o weird with them, but it wasn't... Specially reading ot 6 where we learn that emmett felt sth even back then...
bellastew chapter 8 . 7/14/2011
Loved this outtake! So beautiful...
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