Reviews for The Ex Factor: Outtakes
GothicTemptress chapter 5 . 7/17/2010
"Italian leather sofa. Can't wait to sink my teeth into that."

This was such a unique, hilarious perspective! Loved this!
SarahCullen86 chapter 5 . 7/16/2010
I LOVED this outtake! "shouldn't have left it on the floor" lol. so cute/sad/sweet to see Edward's life through his puppy's eyes :)
beanothercullen chapter 5 . 7/15/2010
If you had told me about this chapter, I would have thought...what the hell? But it was reallly cute and good. Thanks off to read another outtake.
fmneff chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
I have not read this outtake yet, but I have to tell you that I just finished Help Wanted and I give it high honors! I have just recommended it to 2 people today. In fact, I told the one person to move it to the top of her ff list! What an awesome story. I really fell in love with the characters. I laughed and the same paragraph! Great job! Thank you so much for allowing us to read this wonderful story.
smilton chapter 9 . 7/9/2010
Aww.. I love the outtakes with Masn. I love seeing them as a whole family!
Maddy chapter 7 . 7/4/2010
what a bitter bitch who deserved it. He's allowed to be with Tanya if you're broken up. RETARD.
Daisy chapter 4 . 7/4/2010
she was a bitch from day one. cheating whore that she was
Butterflieena chapter 5 . 7/3/2010
I LOVE SPENDOR'S PERSONALITY ! he is beyond funny ..."shouldnt have left her on the floor" lol...ur a great writer ..KEEP IT UP XD
PNW Luna chapter 8 . 5/22/2010
You do an amazing job with the lemons. Beautifully descriptive. My only peeve is that the hymen is located outside the vagina to cover the entrance not somewhere inside. The barrier is breached upon entrance...
LK chapter 9 . 5/19/2010
:D BEST STORY EVER. I wanted the lemon though DAYUM.
SueVain chapter 8 . 5/15/2010
I have missed the ex factor soooooooo much! I have re read it 3 times! Now I have read the outtakes 3 times! I lovve this story so so much. When is the next factor coming? Any idea at all? Sorry just so looking forward to it! you are so talented! Thank you
twilightlover1325 chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
this story is just really good cant wait for next factor
twiquarius chapter 5 . 4/28/2010
spendor's hilarious, well done :) and the thing with the perfume is bittersweet *sighs* i think, i should read some parts of the story again with this new background knowledge
twiquarius chapter 4 . 4/28/2010
sniffs and swallows hard :( poor babies :(
twiquarius chapter 3 . 4/28/2010
OMG *sighs*
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