Reviews for The Ex Factor: Outtakes
Sassenach96 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I Love your writing!

Hope ou can update at TEF Soon!
Jennie T Cullen chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
love your writing. Sorry you have a "block" with TEF, maybe Seduceward can loosen you up some...
kolfan88 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I'm so happy you decided to do outtakes Angie! Even though Edward/any other female character makes me want to barf, I still enjoyed your writing LOL..can't wait for the next chapter of this and TEF!
Twi-Mom12292005 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I love the TEF and Iwait patiently for your up dates. This was Really good... I like the fact you have let us into his mind and can see where he's been and where he's going. Keep it up I look forward to the next update of both...
tkeaton1 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
OK, as hard as that was to read, It let you get a look at his relationship with Aimee and what he was going through at that time of his life! You know I love this story so much! :)
Phoenix-Faie chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
i didnt get to read through this properly... because i was supposed to be getting ready for work lol... but i HAD to read it when i saw the update... so i kinda skimmed through it but not completely... so when i read it fully later when im back from work i will leave a proper, better review on twilighted... but as i said on there i do find it hard to read Edward with someone else... but you do make it hard not to lol

although i really dont like Aimee, i dont know why but she gives a bad vibe, im glad she wasnt the typical girl who gave someone her virginity- you know hanging off him everyday trying to get him to notice her...

i cant wait for the other outtakes now :)
Lisalove83 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Holy hot damn! I'm not in a relationship at the moment, but I'm having eerily similar encounters. I need this "Cullen" haha. I like the fact that you are going back to reveal more into his past. I'd really like it if you could somehow write about how him and Bella were when they were first together. It sounded sweet, before Jacob and Tanya threw things out of whack. I can't wait for more EF! I know you're in a slump right now but remember your fans are here to cheer you on and if you still can't write new chapters, there's always the outtakes!
Ozzma105 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I think this was a great chapter.. I mean it really does explain a lot when it comes to Edward during the Breakup. I hope more out-takes are to come. IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY BTW lol...
datsnotmyname chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
idk why my comment wont post so here it is again lol:

DUDE DUDE DUDE!

It was effing AMAZING!

Im sure no one would bother if Seduceward takes away their v-card lmao ;)

Anyways, keep the outtakes coming Ang!

Can't wait for more :D
Sarah chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Totally loved it!
datsnotmyname chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
DUDE DUDE DUDE!

This chapter was made of pure epic win!

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

Seduceward is just f*ing awesome

I think anyone would give Seduceward their v-cards lmao

Can't wait for more outtakes :) 3.
jules0427 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
scratch and sniff cards would be hot! it was not so bad to read it. i think you are right that he needed a muse and see really how bad it was. i hope you are ready to give us a chap. 28! i am curious though to see where this takes us? will we see some edward and bella confrontation? it was hot in the first chapter when they were fighting at the club...
hdink chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Sad about the writer's lock, only because I am always itching for another chapter...but this was great. It's nice to see this side of Edward...the one that used to exist and to know exactly how it went down with Aimee.
fanficreader83 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
that was highly entertaining... but I will be honest when I say that I am glad that he is done with that type of activity (with other woment besides bella I mean)! ;)
nadiaaaBABY chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
honestly even if this wasnt an E/B thing i LOVED it.

we can see what a douche Edward was here and how he matured in those 3 weeks at the cabin by having Bella back in his life once again and he shows his determination on not messing it up a secont time.

keep the outakes coming Ang.

i agree with you if i was aimee i would totally give him my V-card D
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