|Reviews for the imperfect r e p l i c a:|
| Queen of Dreaming chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Well, I don't know so far. I might look this up again. Looking at this, I have a few doubts... for one thing, if she's watching her town get destroyed by darkness, it needs more than one sentence. However, the lack of paragraphs and paragraphs describing Midori's perfect appearance is a very good thing; you don't have too many "Sue" signs so far. Keep being careful with that (give us some idea of what she looks like, but don't spend forever on it, just a sentence here and there), and run her through a few litmus tests. You seem good so far. Best wishes!
| Matei-san chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
HI! It's Matei-san from Youtube. i love your story so far please update really soon. I really love that pairing so much of XionXRoxas, so keep up the good work.
| NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
THIS IS AWESOME! BELIEVE IT!
Just remember to watch your grammer and remember to space!