|Reviews for Volition|
| my2galspal chapter 6 . 8/28/2009
I love that you write a story in which I hear my favorite characters speak with Irish accents in my head and then you use "y'all" in your A/N. Such a fun contradiction.
I'm glad Bella and Edward were able to have a serious conversation in this chapter. I can see that Bella is happy with just enough information. At this point she still likes being in the dark a bit. I'm wondering how long that will last.
I was wondering when, or if, you were going to introduce Jasper. I'm intrigued that you let him remain a Texan. I started to call him a Yank but I think that's probably a sacrilige and that someone from Texas might hunt me down and hurt me. I look forward to hearing more of his story, namely what brought him to Ireland.
Thanks for sharing your writing. This is a fantastic stroy and I always get excited when I see you have updated.
| tnuccio chapter 3 . 8/28/2009
see, I'm glad I kept the faith...
lovely first date! sweet and innocent.
| tnuccio chapter 2 . 8/28/2009
O that Victoria...O_o...
I'm going to trust you here and figure she has something to do with "the effort" and not Edward's effort...I'm giving him the benefit of the doubt...
Okay, next chapter...
| tinkytinka chapter 6 . 8/28/2009
Thanks for mentioning me, really nice of you. :o) I really like how you just seem to be in the mindset of how the emotions of the relationships were at the time. Like in the beginning of the chapter with Alice and Bella and their relationships to Jasper and Edward, it all seems and feels so genuine. And i love the interaction between all the characters how you describe Bella and Edward's somewhat (and definitely increasing) comfortable interaction, and then bringing in Jasper, I think it's brilliant to have him be from Texas and perhaps be able to extent his character a bit more than from just having him be like Edward and Emmett, like a lot of other stories have. And Alice is just adorable, I like her seeming more human and more nervous than the usual hyper, confident, shopaholic girl - great characterization on there. :o) There's just something about Bella, that seems different here, that I really like, can't really put my finger on it, but I'm sure it will show itself more in the next chapters. It was a really great character building chapter, without it being heavy, and you touch a lot of topics and drop hints, that will be exciting to read about. :o) Dropped you a PM also, had some more I wanted to say that I didn't think fitted in to this chapter review. ;o)
| tnuccio chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Um wow! What an opening chapter! I'ma have to send Tiffany a gift basket for rec'ing this one to me.
I'm Irish so I love the whole Irish aspect. I'm off to the next chapter...
Dare I say I adore your Edward already? humm didn't think so but...
| manda2784 chapter 6 . 8/28/2009
Great chapter! I'm glad Bella and Edward talked. I'd be terrified if I were in her shoes, but I think she needs to know what's happening, so I'm glad you included that. I love that Esme knew exactly what was going on, when Edward and Bella thought they had this secret! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! I can't wait to see how things continue to go for Edward and Bella. I'm also anxious to see how things go for Edward and Emmett and with Alice and Jasper. Keep up the great writing!
| kmfroggi chapter 6 . 8/28/2009
that mass should be interesting! lol. love that we met jasper, should be an interesting party. its so funny that everyone could see how bxe looked at each other to know how they felt. love their time together too. cant wait for more
| Babette12 chapter 6 . 8/28/2009
I loved meeting Jasper! You did that so well. I could just picture Alice being all bouncy and nervous as she introduced him to Edward. Her brother's opinion is important to her, even is she says it isn't.
I also thought it funny that Esme knew Bella spent the night in Edward's room, and teased her about it. I know I laughed at my own kids. Like we can't tell what's going on, we've been there ourselves!
Do you have a thread started for this yet? Or am I just blind and unable to find it? I've been terrible about being on the threads, but you should have one.
So, there wasn't much info in there about how Edward became the leader. Like Bella, I think there was more to it, but Edward doesn't want her to know. It was probably pretty violent. As I remember, these were hard men fighting an impossible battle.
| nicnicd chapter 6 . 8/28/2009
I adore you, I adore this fic, and I crush on IRAward.
It makes me feel breezy and dreamy, and I fall in love a little bit more every chapter. Sigh.
| jeprdy chapter 5 . 8/27/2009
Aw, he loves her too! Damn Rochelle, this is good! I didn't even know you'd continued it until I clicked on your banner. Silly me... I can't believe Edward is the ring-leader. That oughta make for some dangerous & interesting events in the upcoming chapters!
| Just Another Phase chapter 5 . 8/27/2009
I TOTALLY needed the history lesson...while I enjoyed the story, I was kinda of ignorant about the semantics of it all... so that was really helpful.
And Edward is the leader? I can see that, but I sometimes wonder what he's thinking. I wonder why he decided to make a move on Bella at the time that he did. I like how he's in the protector role, but I'm not sure I completely trust him... I'm not sure what to think yet.
Love the story, and can't wait for more... whoever put the AoE contest together was brilliant... I have enjoyed more stories from that contest than any other! So glad that you decided to continue your story!
| Just Another Phase chapter 4 . 8/27/2009
doh! shut down by the big bro...never a good scene! Love it!
| Just Another Phase chapter 3 . 8/27/2009
LOL at him not liking red heads and then Bella calling him one...
“It’s not that red, is it?” - then he gets all self-conscious!
| Just Another Phase chapter 2 . 8/27/2009
What the heck is wrong with Edward? And why hasn't he called? That's always the question though... great story... can't wait to see what's really going on with Edward/Victoria
| Just Another Phase chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
Really enjoyed this first chapter...the whole rescue scene and lemon was pretty hot!