Reviews for Volition
papillione chapter 10 . 9/24/2009
What a cliffie!The suspense is killing always great job!Loved the scene at the sea,I love the intimacy betwenn Edward and Bella.
manda2784 chapter 10 . 9/24/2009
Good chapter. I'm glad Bella's Mom talked to her and basically told her she needed to be completely in or out, and I'm definitely glad Bella and Edward talked. I think any relationship, but especially one like Bella and Edward's where he's involved in something so dangerous needs to have honesty.

Wow, the RUC sounds pretty freakin scary. I'm sure Edward and Emmett will be very upset that Bella has been so directly involved now. I'm very curious about how they will react.

What a cliffhanger! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
tinkytinka chapter 10 . 9/24/2009
Uh, a cliffie, is that your first? I think so. :o) Well, it's going to be an exciting next chapter that's for sure, can't wait to see what Edward and the rest of them are going to say about the situation Bella is in now, because of what he/they do, and of course what will happen. :o)

Well, back to this chapter. :o) Liked that we got a sense of Renee's feelings about all of this, it gives it some perspective of how a "responsible" adult feels about the whole situation without having new love involved. ;o)

Edward and Bella together keep making me so happy, they just fit in with each other, without much fuss about it.

Thanks Ro, for the long chapter! :o)
Soccer11 chapter 10 . 9/24/2009
oh poor mikey got hit. hopefully bella gives those guys a tongue lashing cant wait for the next chapter
vix2020 chapter 10 . 9/24/2009
“Where was Edward Cullen last Friday and Saturday?”

AH! Damn you, Ro! I love you. FUCKING AWESOME!
tnuccio chapter 10 . 9/24/2009
oh no oh no oh no! this is just not good...

it's gonna get ugly now isn't it...

I can't wait a whole week! It'll kill me!
nicnicd chapter 10 . 9/24/2009
Poor Bella, in the clank with the cramps. I feel for her...

I love you, that is all.
vanilladoubleshot chapter 10 . 9/24/2009
Your story turns me inside-out and rips me up and I love it. I really root for your Edward and Bella.
SpencerReidFan89 chapter 10 . 9/24/2009
Ah! OMG! I hope that they don't catch him! I can't wait for more! :P
aingealeire chapter 10 . 9/24/2009
Oh shite...
jeprdy chapter 9 . 9/24/2009
I just keep loving this story more & more Rochelle! I swear, I'm viusalzing the city, the houses, the rooms, everything while I'm reading! I'd swear if I didn't know any better, that you were writing this from either memory of living in Ireland during this time, or that you lived there now & had family that experienced this. Extremely well done & can't wait for the next installment :)

coxie chapter 9 . 9/23/2009
That had me just as worried as Bella about the boys. My heart just dropped when she saw the paper and then heard about the accident.
monomo chapter 9 . 9/22/2009
Aww I'm so happy they made it back ok, but that must have been really hard for them when Pat died.

And at the end when Edward was crying, to me it was like he was thinking about what His parents would be going through, or even Bella if he were to die. And I think that made me love IRAward even more.

I'm glad they wont be leaving again anytime soon :]

Great chapter Ro!
getshorty chapter 9 . 9/21/2009
I am so wrapped up in this Edward and Bella and it's the time period, I've never read anything regarding the conflict in Ireland during this time, I'm hooked! This was very emotional, their love is growing so sweetly, but so is the danger, yikes! Well done Ro!
tnuccio chapter 9 . 9/21/2009
okay, super uber mad here...for some reason I didn't get the update email so I've been sitting and going mad waiting! I checked my account today and saw the update...squee, then mad I didn't see it earlier!

any who...the update was wonderful and stressful. My stomach was in knots with Bella...the waiting is horrible.

I'm glad everyone knows what's going on now but the image of Edward in the black ski mask is just haunting to me...the eyes shining through...

Thank you so much for the update! I loved it.
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