|Reviews for Volition|
| MsHavisham79 chapter 12 . 11/7/2013
ah shite! Poor Emmett. And now I'm going to be worried about Rose and her baby too since she has a history of miscarriage.
| MsHavisham79 chapter 11 . 11/7/2013
I absolutely love the way she is always straight forward with Edward, tells him what she wants, it makes for such better communication. I love you for writing it that way.
| MsHavisham79 chapter 10 . 11/7/2013
OMGOMGOMG. guhhhhhhhhhhhh I am terrified right now! I wonder if this is one of the moments that Liv was talking about when she said my heart would pound right out of my chest!
| MsHavisham79 chapter 9 . 11/7/2013
The burden he must feel. I want to hug him but I suppose Bella is better suited for the job.
And I don't know how she deals with the waiting, it would kill me. I don't think I could ever be with someone in the military, it is hard enough that my brother is in the service.
| MsHavisham79 chapter 8 . 11/7/2013
*swoooooons* He left his ring on her finger. *swoooooons*
| MsHavisham79 chapter 7 . 11/7/2013
I am so, so torn as to whether I want him to let her help or not. It would be something to bond over and spend time together but do they not know I'll then be sitting here worried about BOTH of them?
| MsHavisham79 chapter 6 . 11/7/2013
bribing a man with "interesting" things to go to church - this is my kind of girl!
Edward's reaction when he heard his mother telling Bella about his track record was priceless, I almost hope Alice does want to sit down over tea! lol
| MsHavisham79 chapter 5 . 11/7/2013
I love you for weaving so much history into this. And the fact that I can even concentrate enough to say that after they exchanged I Love You's is testament to your wonderful writing.
Now I am going to flail about the I love you's - alfb;kanbksndfb[lne[obinqetbnebn
| MsHavisham79 chapter 4 . 11/7/2013
I love that she thinks about how he smells. I find scent memory and connection to be one of the strongest things.
And gah, he asked her Dad too.
They are all kinds of adorable together, the stuff in the candy store was crazy cute!
| MsHavisham79 chapter 3 . 11/7/2013
I'm glad I gave him the benefit of the doubt, that was what I HOPED the story was. But you can never be too sure, especially since his best friend felt compelled to warn her about him. But that was a relief. And I am thrilled he actually did what he said he would and spoke to Emmett about it.
| MsHavisham79 chapter 2 . 11/7/2013
I am trying VERY hard to give him the benefit of the doubt right now. VERY HARD!
The language you are using is so perfect, I love that you used the word article to describe an idiotic person. PERFECT for this fic.
| MsHavisham79 chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
sighhhhhhhhhhh. I am so, so fail. I SHOULD have read this sooner, but Liv rightly smacked me around and told me to read it. So here I am, ready to flood your inbox again. Omg so much happened this chapter (I know it was originally a o/s but still!)
I love that he saved her, I love it even more that he is so straight forward.
I have been warned there are moments where my heart will pound right out of my chest, I cannot wait!
| Eeyorefan12 chapter 31 . 10/15/2013
I thought I had read everything you've written but somehow I missed this! Thank goodness someone mentioned it on Twitter last night. Lovely story, and even informative for me. Thank you.
| geosordino chapter 15 . 9/14/2013
Just started reading this, but I love it.
| missmariaeuge chapter 27 . 9/5/2013
I really enjoyed this story. It was very interesting. I have to admit that i read it imitating an irish accent in my head, lol, or at least tried... It was fun!
The outtakes were great, too.
Thank you for sharing this, xx