Reviews for Diamonds
Catthecat chapter 1 . 7/3
Great story but one question:how did Jayfeather find the diamonds if he can't see?And what about Lionblaze, I wonder how he will feel if he finds out?
Avvy chapter 1 . 8/28/2016
I loved it! Thank you for this great fanfic,and keep working hard!
ronnie chapter 1 . 8/10/2016
it was good
l chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
it needs to be longer not so quick to get to the point plus don't make up things about cats that arnt true I don't mean that cinderheart and jayfeather shouldn't be together just stuff like jayfeather being strong because he's obvisly not. im not trying to criticize you just giving you tips.
Mandriel chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Until Hollyleaf comes in and says, "What are you doing in my den?" XD
FOXCLAW chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
cinderxlion chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
thesecretsinmyhair chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
im guessing u havent read fading echoes...!this is GREAT!

if of course it was a couple that i should not mention...


they go on a date! ( well kinda )
Kokoro no Hana chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
they are meant for each other!
Danderfur chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Ah! How could he? He's part of the Three for Starclan's sake!
AsterEris chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Hm. I like the way the story flows, you did a good job with setting the scene and the mood. There were a few typos/grammatical errors, but that's normal. I like this one-shot; it shows a different side of both Jayfeather and Cinderheart. The one issue that caught my attention was that Cinderheart would have no problem walking in the dark - after all, cats are nocturnal and her eyes work just as well at night. Still, not a big deal, and it's good overall. Well done!

Aquamarinelightnight chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
so beautomousD cute!
it-will-be-anarchy chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Aw, cute CinderJay! I LUV CinderJay.
Joysong chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
AW! thats soo cute!

its written pretty well too!

I just wish Jayfeather would be like that in the real books too!

Very cute!
Nianque chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Good story, one question though... How does Jayfeather know what diamonds are?
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