|Reviews for The Girl From The Future|
| xyzzy chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
A couple of pointers.
"Okay" is a 20th century word; it did not exist prior to World War One. It's "okay" for a 21th century companion to use the word, but not Horatio or anyone else from the 19th century.
A woman on a ship would be given cabin, not just a bunk. Of course, the cabin might not be much bigger than the narrow bunk inside, but it would provide a private place to sleep - a rare luxury.
"...women rarely wore trousers of such a tight fashion."
Women NEVER wore trousers of ANY fashion until the 20th century. A woman wearing trousers in the 19th century would be as common as a man dressing in drag today and expecting no one to notice.
| VictorianxxLyddie chapter 2 . 8/9/2010
I like this story,
I'd love to read some more of it.
| royandjohnnyfan chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
Excellent First Two Chapters on your story. I Love It.
| IJones007 chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
I like it :)
I like the way you opened the chapter with the Doctor shouting 'Run'.
Love it :)