Reviews for The Girl From The Future
xyzzy chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
A couple of pointers.

"Okay" is a 20th century word; it did not exist prior to World War One. It's "okay" for a 21th century companion to use the word, but not Horatio or anyone else from the 19th century.

A woman on a ship would be given cabin, not just a bunk. Of course, the cabin might not be much bigger than the narrow bunk inside, but it would provide a private place to sleep - a rare luxury.

"...women rarely wore trousers of such a tight fashion."

Women NEVER wore trousers of ANY fashion until the 20th century. A woman wearing trousers in the 19th century would be as common as a man dressing in drag today and expecting no one to notice.
VictorianxxLyddie chapter 2 . 8/9/2010
I like this story,

it's comical.

I'd love to read some more of it.
royandjohnnyfan chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
Excellent First Two Chapters on your story. I Love It.
IJones007 chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
I like it :)

I like the way you opened the chapter with the Doctor shouting 'Run'.

Love it :)