Reviews for Harry Potter and Love's Triumvirate
Epeefencer chapter 28 . 9/28/2013
Illogical chapter. Why take Ginny when they had Harry at their mercy? Just doesn't make any sense.
Epeefencer chapter 22 . 5/29/2013
Harry's parents were killed on Halloween!
Arithmetic13 chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
Is this a Harry/Tonks fic?
smileyluvstwilight chapter 32 . 9/17/2011
Great story!
Neumzie chapter 5 . 7/31/2010
ah, so this is the chapter of monologues, i guess
Neumzie chapter 4 . 7/31/2010
wow, virtually all dialogue. not even a ",said harry" or a "ron exclaimed."
Nifty Niffler chapter 5 . 7/12/2010
I'm SOOO glad Harry isn't being dumb and he and Ginny are already together.
avalonchick5 chapter 32 . 7/10/2010
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Nice story. It really was very good. I enjoyed reading it.

Criticism...I'd have to say I never pictured Harry as a "take it slow" type of teen in the beginning, I'm wondering where that came from?

All things considered, it was a pleasure to read. And now...on to the sequel!

Love from,

AVchick5 3
Lord Xantos A. Fowl chapter 29 . 5/24/2010
more detail on your recomendations please
Lord Xantos A. Fowl chapter 26 . 5/23/2010
i agree twists of fate amazing but you should mention the soul-bond thing

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very good story it is rare that i put an author in my favorites even rarer in the allerts story allerts rather frequant but you are all 3
moviemaster chapter 5 . 4/13/2010
I like the story, I really do, but the conversation just... I don't know how to describe it. First of all, in multiple person conversation, it's good to do something to indicate who said what. JKR didn't do that a few times in her story, and I think one could debate who said a few lines in her books. Using names so often in responses hurts the flow.

That, and the entire conversations just do not flow. I can't continue to read, but I appreciate the effort.
Ginny Guerra chapter 8 . 3/8/2010
In the last point, you jump from one thing to another with no transition.
Ginny Guerra chapter 6 . 3/8/2010
As a matter of fact, they all mastered the Patronus beore Umbridge blew the DA, especially Ginny.
Ginny Guerra chapter 4 . 3/8/2010
The storyline is interesting, and the telling is nice. Just a little more attention to the punctuation and spelling and you'll have an amazing story!
nightwing27 chapter 10 . 1/10/2010
too bad alot of stories are completly unfinish since the idiots quit on them. Good thing I will never do that unlike others I don't hate my stories and will never rewrite or drop it
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