Reviews for Forgiven
Guest chapter 8 . 10/15/2017
2009 - 4009 200 years. Someone clearly doesn't know how to do math. The year should be 2209 after 2 centuries, not 4009.
iJustinee chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Amazing story I can't wait to read more.
CloudyNight chapter 13 . 7/6/2011
Lol, you said you hadn't updated in months on your A/N and I was like... What? Her story hasn't even been up for a month... Then I went back and realized it's been up for two years, since it just passed the mark for two years a few weeks ago. XD
CloudyNight chapter 11 . 7/6/2011
I think after she found Edward, that the excitement slipped slightly. There needs to be a problem. Just a thought. But it's still an amazing story!
CloudyNight chapter 10 . 7/6/2011
Bella! OmigodOmigodOmigod! I absolutely LOVE IT! That was such a cute line!
CloudyNight chapter 9 . 7/6/2011
If I don't get reviews, I'll make it something crappy. Random!

I'm guessing he's gonna propose. That's an obvious answer though so uh... Yeah that's all I got.
CloudyNight chapter 8 . 7/6/2011
Lol. Alice XD I also love how they gasp when Edward smiles!
CloudyNight chapter 7 . 7/6/2011
AUGUST RUSH IS THE BEST EMOTIONAL MOVIE I'VE EVER SEEN! Literally, my DAD cries when he watches it. Well... He cried in Narnia when the lion died too but... other than that it's pretty rare. Especially for happy endings XD
CloudyNight chapter 6 . 7/6/2011
SOOO Cute! You've got that little squeal in the back of my throat dying to come out and saw AW at every cute part! Wich is for half the chapter for like... Three chapters.
CloudyNight chapter 5 . 7/6/2011
AW! That's adorable!
CloudyNight chapter 4 . 7/6/2011
THis is an awesome story so far! I love all the futuristic stuff and all that!
CloudyNight chapter 2 . 7/6/2011
This is pretty good. Strange, interesting and cute. And, aww! Poor Edward!
Angelkitten09 chapter 8 . 6/25/2011
I don't know if you know this but you have this set in 4009, which means its been 2 centuries, 2 thousand years. In this chapter Bella says 2 hundred years. I don't know if you misspoke.

If you want it to have been 2 hundred years then it would be 2209.

I'd thought I let you know. Not trying to be critical or rude.
vickisan chapter 14 . 6/8/2011
Are you sure you don't want to continue? You started with such an interesting premise!
Louisvuittonfreak chapter 13 . 6/2/2011
I love it...I hope you update soon...it's a great story
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