|Reviews for Age of Consent|
| colrey chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Read the whole story on ADF. Really loved it. It was great.
| wattle1 chapter 12 . 6/16/2011
What a great story! I have gone over to 'a different forest' and read the end of this story,also the epilogue and I have to let you know that I enjoyed both of your stories immensely. While I am a bit sad that it is all over you did such a great job bringing the characters to life and you have such a great writing style. Good luck with your writing and thanks for sharing your story with us.
| ATT159 chapter 6 . 6/9/2011
She must be high all the time. There is no other explanation for her behavior.
| lmacg2 chapter 12 . 5/22/2011
fucking amazing. that is all. hahaha
| Beautiful Blood Red Roses chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
"Umm, I'm right here."
Hahahahahahaha! Woww, that was soo funny...
Love this story so far!
| EmmaLeighL chapter 12 . 5/4/2011
Okay, first of all, I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story. And the last chapter especially, at the party, was so incredibly well written, so intense, and the tension was so palpable. Your writing is so skillful and the two POVs/voices are unique and appropriate.
However, I feel like all the way up until this chapter, Edward has been deciding that she's the one, he's done, this is it, he's in love, he'll wait for her and be with her. He even says that he's glad he met her now rather than 3-4 years later, so he gets those extra few years with her. He seems to be settling in for a lifetime, and his only concern is that she'll freak out. But then, in this chapter, we start to get hints that he's not serious, he's afraid of commitment, he's toying with her, etc. That really bothers me, not because he's afraid of commitment (whatever, even a 16 yr old can handle that if she knows what's coming), but because he's constantly suggesting to her they have a future, without her pressing him for that.
I know this story is complete, so I could be getting bent out of shape about nothing, but I don't really like drama injected into a story from left field. I expected the drama to involve his blue balls, her youth, others' reactions, perhaps his jealousy of Jacob/other guys, Bella running into exes, etc etc. It just seems like, wtf.
But anyway, LOVE the story. I'd like to gush more, but it will get embarrassing. I want to compare the moods and the tension evoked by your writing to how great poetry says more than is actually written, etc etc - but I'm rambling. Great work.
| bella0609 chapter 6 . 4/16/2011
This is really cute :)
| bella0609 chapter 4 . 4/16/2011
So Edward feels the same way - guess I should have figured! This should be interesting!
| bella0609 chapter 3 . 4/16/2011
Alice will be Alice! Poor Bella :( There's like 10 years between them.
| bella0609 chapter 2 . 4/16/2011
Just started reading - I think I'm hooked :)
Tell me - Is Bella really smart? How can she be turning seventeen going into her senior year of high school?
| karenec chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
this story is great - the inner monlogues are completely hilarious!
| misskittymeow chapter 12 . 3/17/2011
Okay, so I have been waiting to read this message for DECADES it feels like. I adored this story from the first chapter and I cannot even tell you how excited I am that you did indeed finish it! I honestly don't know how I just figured this out.. ALL THIS TIME AND I COULD HAVE BEEN READING!
Thank you sooooooooo much.
So now if you don't mind I am going to stay up all night reading this beautiful story (:
| cheltivia chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
i love this
| TwilightJemS chapter 6 . 3/11/2011
| TwilightJemS chapter 5 . 3/10/2011