|Reviews for When the Water's Not So Clear|
| jasper quinn chapter 16 . 2/17/2015
But nooo this was like the best story ever please don't finish it Ilove dam iI am so mad at you
| MysonSeth chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
No! U have 2 finish! Pleeeeeeease!
| teddyizready chapter 16 . 11/25/2013
I feel like u just destroyed any feelings I've ever had for fanfiction just cause u stopped writing this
| Twilightduhbest chapter 16 . 3/27/2013
Awwwww... I got really into this story... :'(
| Ennah1887 chapter 16 . 11/20/2012
You may want to come back. The story's are really good, and it might not be how you intended it, but 246 is alot of reveiws, and your lucky. My story, also my first I almost discontinued because of how little people were reveiwing. You are lucky, and also tallented
| fanreader chapter 16 . 9/20/2012
please continue or at least tie it up,
its a really good story...
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/23/2012
What you better update are you serious
| jacob black rulez chapter 16 . 3/28/2011
oh i just started to read this story and its great lol such a shame that it might not get finished but oh well i just wanted to let you know that i have loved read what you have wrote so far and i think you did a wonderful job the chapters (even the ones you thought were not good)were great they kept me interested in the story the theme was constant and it made the story come together so well you are very talented and i look forward to reading more of your stories
| JakeSethFan chapter 16 . 1/2/2011
I just finished chapter fifteen after three to four hours of non-stop reading, and was surprised to only see an author's note the next.
And a heartbreaking one, nonetheless.
It's been a really great read, and I truly enjoyed it. I'm sad to know you've lost interest in this. But it's okay. It was still fantastic 3
Thanks so much! :)
| Sasuke-Uchiha's-Slut chapter 3 . 12/24/2010
Awesome story. I've been hating Bella for a while and i swear she gets in the way of Seth and Jacob being together I am gonna kick her ass. Seriously. LOVE THE STORY ;]
| Patrick JLouis chapter 16 . 7/15/2010
You can't just like leave this story! This is one of the best I have read! I read this story in three days and I lived it from beggining to finish (well the ending was kinda weird in some places. Didn't really fit all together.) But, nonetheless you need to finish this story and add the cullens. You are an awesome writer. xoxoxo
| britni chapter 7 . 7/15/2010
*squeal* that was soooo cute! I love this story!
| PockyPand4 chapter 15 . 7/7/2010
If Stephanie can have many random unexplainable horrific-deaths be called 'animal attacks' when there are barley any animals other than deer that are dumb enough to live in forks and still make an EPIC money stash out of it...you can have a bunch of bonerworthy scenes that are even EPICER and have a couple 'accidents'.
| PockyPand4 chapter 13 . 7/7/2010
O.o...FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT! WHO'S THE FAG NOW? lol still you
| PockyPand4 chapter 9 . 7/7/2010