|Reviews for War|
| Sifl-senpai chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
WHAT IS IT GOOD FOR? ABSOLUTELY NOTHIN' ('CEPT FOR THE CONCEPT OF THIS FIC, WHICH IS RATHER DEPRESSING IN A GOOD WAY)
SAY IT AGAIN!
Anyway, all song jokes aside, I did enjoy this. The first three paragraphs are a little vague and could use some fleshing out, but from then on it's like, BANG! Angst-with-point-and-direction is all systems go! And the "Pokey says you're stupid" thing (and what it implies *my heart breaks*) is a good thing to have in there but it needs to be explained better in the first paragraph. (However, I also realize the whole "English ain't my first language, Sifl, you b!ch!" Thing, so I really do applaud you for how well it flows.)
YOU'RE GOOD AT GENFIC, COMMANDER!
| Blue Toad chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
I like this. A lot.
One thing that always appeals to me about Earthbound is that the characters are only kids at heart, and they're carrying the fate of the world on their shoulders. And you reflect that perfectly here. The style of writing is great and at the same time easy to sink into. An impressive job madam, I bow to you.