Reviews for Parallel Moon
Moon Sea Star chapter 16 . 6/7/2010
I love this story! It's so sweet :) I'm sad you ended it so soon...
Mason and Alex chapter 16 . 6/6/2010
love it ;D
DesignatedReader chapter 13 . 5/8/2010
Good job but short
DesignatedReader chapter 12 . 5/8/2010
Good segway but way too short.
DesignatedReader chapter 11 . 5/8/2010
Needs more detail. But a good concept.
DesignatedReader chapter 10 . 5/8/2010
Good but short
DesignatedReader chapter 9 . 5/8/2010
Good writing but way too short.
DesignatedReader chapter 8 . 5/8/2010
Good job writing bpov.
DesignatedReader chapter 7 . 5/8/2010
Wow I like that we didn't have to read the angst of them waiting for wks on end for a battle to start. Nice writing.
DesignatedReader chapter 6 . 5/7/2010
You cliffhangered me! Nice writing.
DesignatedReader chapter 5 . 5/7/2010
I like your Bella, she doesn't whine give up on life. There's something special about a fighter.
DesignatedReader chapter 4 . 5/7/2010
The first meeting seemed a litttle rushed. Not bad though. You managed to cram in all the important info.
DesignatedReader chapter 3 . 5/7/2010
I love me some Jacob. Still a little short.
DesignatedReader chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
A little bit short but otherwise good.
DesignatedReader chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Nice start. Can't wait to read more.
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