Reviews for My Love At First Sight
Fangirl chapter 3 . 12/11/2013
lol Awesome.
hitomi65 chapter 3 . 8/26/2012
great story
LuanRina chapter 3 . 9/10/2010
So sweet and funny!Aww just imagining Zero-chan in that maid outfit makes me lose consciousness from massive nosebleed and his utter cuteness! x3 Hope you'll give us the next chapter sooner. Please UPDATE ASAP!
irmina chapter 3 . 10/14/2009
I hope you will continue with this story. This is really adorable! Zero in a maid outfit... all blushed and shy ... pls pls continue!
yuu chapter 3 . 9/10/2009
Hi!

I'm back.

Saw your 'My Love At First Sight'.

Good story but...

Too many spelling error...

Maybe you should ask someone to check your spelling before posting at online.

Your story are really interesting created by you.

But there is two things you need to note while writing the story.

1-Spelling

2-Wording space.

If you can improve in these both areas, I think more reader can understand your story more and will have the feeling of reading it again.

Too many spelling areas, may cause reader to stop reading as some may don't understand what you are trying to write.

While the spacing for the word, too close together, reader may get lost between the lines and their eyes sight may can tired easily making the reader to stop reading your story.

To me, I think you can change and make this story with 'The Light Prince' a more better and interesting story for us, readers to read.

Good Luck and waiting for your new update chapter.

You can do it, never give up.
irmina chapter 3 . 8/24/2009
Very good. Can't wait for KaZe lemon.
shokubu chapter 3 . 8/4/2009
you got some really interesting idea but...your...spelling...it's kind of irratated me. i got really bad eye sight so my mind got more n more confused when i read the story causing me to read it again n again...(well that is my 't worry)

i love your story but...it's too short. anyway i still love it...

zero wearing dress...hahahaha...i got to see this.(if i got to)

ps:have you read my story? snapshot? every chapter had a photo of zero cross-dressing...(it is still chapter 1 though)
Shinreigari chapter 3 . 7/5/2009
I luv kanamexzero's lemon

make it well o

plz update soon X)
kanze4ever chapter 3 . 7/4/2009
CUTE! XD it doesn't suck. don't worry! continue wif the next chapter pls! yes! lemons! love lemons! update soon!

note: u might wanna check ur commas n stops. otherwise ur sentences all seem 2 run together.
Avie Raze chapter 3 . 7/4/2009
oh my god give me the next chapter! please!
Avie Raze chapter 2 . 7/4/2009
oh! i really liked it please update soon!
Chiyoko Choco-boco-lina chapter 2 . 6/23/2009
You're off to a good start and i like it very much

but the story is lacking a bit in length and spelling -_-

May I offer you some advice and perhaps beta your work? I'm always happy to help. Currently i cannot bring myself to work on/post/update any of my stories at this time due to my grief and i would like to have something to do to take my mind of it and to help someone out. You don't have to if you dont want to, I just want to help.

Best Regards

Chiyoko-chan
AlwaysTheNegativeOptimist chapter 2 . 6/17/2009
Oh my gosh!

I don't like Yuki much, but in this fic her and I have the same fantasies!

;)
Hanamaru chapter 2 . 6/14/2009
Yuki's inner yaoi fan girl awoke LOL!

cute story

Hana
20eKuRaN15 chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
The plot is nice... Though there are some misspelled words.. But overall i think this story is good...
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