|Reviews for It Should Be Me|
| Bella Dazzles chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
LA LA LA LOVED IT!
That was cute...super cute!
| TheDay'sEye chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
I was convinced that was going to end with her and whom ever and I thought; I can deal with that, it's only fair for her to move on.
BUT I am so happy that Edward grows a pair of balls and tells her.
| ValiumWaltzes chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
This is really, really sad and sweet. I'm SO happy you ended it with them deciding to get together. I was REALLY worried Bella would marry someone else :-)
| Mona-the-Lisa chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Wow that was beautifully written.
Awesome job with the storyline. I had no idea where you were going with it. ;)
I wish my writers block looked this good [
| jasminefksu chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Great job, but I would have loved to see the drama that follows. Sometimes you have to let you imagination run free. Once again, great job.
| acydrose chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Loved it :D
I was expecting a sad ending but it was still a great one shot :)
| gracethegal chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
that's really sweet!
| kellcullen chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Aww that was so sweet. I love it!
| Till tomorrow chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Well, I'm glad he finally grew some balls at the end... It was well written but I didn't like the story Idea. It was to ooc for Edward.
| BellaEdwardlover1991 chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
I like it :) Thans for updating something!
| Teeny Tiny Twilight chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
)_) omg, i live for your stories, and i love when you give us a happy ending. I want to cry right now for poor insecure Edward. Thank you so much for this.
| sammiesro chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
oh yeah i like this can't wait for the update
| emamula chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
It's rather amazing what your writer's block produces. It almost makes it worth the wait for other updates... Almost.
Really sweet and cute and heartbreaking, but love the happy. :]
| Jiyah chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Such a sweet one-shot... it's short stories like this that make me smile...
Hope your writer's block is cleared :D
| Avaleigh1 chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
I'm so glad I have you on author alert. Loved this.
I thought it was amazing how you nailed the differences between 5 year old Edward, 17 year old Edward, 22 year old Edward, and finally 27 year old Edward.
Lines that summed up who he was at the different ages
-I’m not supposed to like her hugging me according to my friend Emmett, but he’s not around right now and I take this chance to just like it, hugging her back. Her brown hair is kinda frizzy and it gets in my mouth because I’m smiling so wide, but I don’t mind because she smells really good.
- kinda don’t like it when she holds my hand, because then my hand starts to get real hot and sweat and that makes me blush because I don’t want her to let go of me because of that.
-I try not to think about it because there’s only one person I’d want to go with, but I’m terrified of asking her.
-It seems like I should be trying to spend as much time with her as I can, but I’m pulling back.
-And maybe I just want to steal these few precious hours to hold her tightly before I have to let go. Because I know I’m going to have to, having seen how beautiful she is tonight.
-We kiss and take what we can now that we have the chance. She doesn’t understand why this is it. Maybe she never will because maybe I’ll never tell her.
-It was more than I wished for. I let myself believe that high school was it. I was glad that I still had another guaranteed four years with her.
-I kiss her softly one last time. “I do, because you’ll think it is too one day,” I whisper, letting her know one part of my secret fear, but knowing she won’t understand.
-A couple hours maybe. We hold hands, and the same fear of it that gripped me when I was five grips me again, but I’m use to it now.
-I can do nothing else except leave my life behind.
You showed us what Charlie is like with only a few words:
-He glances warningly at me. Known me since I was a kid or not, I am suddenly a ‘date’ and dates aren’t to be trusted, because they break girl’s hearts and hurt them, and specifically his little girl.
Loved the symbolism of the leg twitching throughout the years.