|Reviews for No Good Deed|
| Nvrmore chapter 3 . 6/16/2009
heh heh heh... I like the ending.
So, that answers that question. Apparently Laura doesn't remember either. But so cool that she and Dean still seem to have a connection.
And Sam really needs to get a grip. ;)
I think this is the shortest story of yours I've ever read. But it's not really over, now is it? Aside from the obvious that you've already posted another chapter (under a new title).
By the way, I'm so happy to see you being prolific again! Awesome.
Okay... I'm going to check out the next chapter, but I might end up going to bed.
Very cool, though, and I can't wait to see how they get their memories back. Interesting...
| Nvrmore chapter 2 . 6/16/2009
Funny the kinds of assumptions people make, especially about our poor boys. Hee hee.
Alrighty - pretty cool that Dean still retains some of his... training (I wouldn't call them instincts), but it's dangerous for him that he doesn't have the memory, either, which means the knowledge of how to get her back. hm... and he's taking the pic, so unless Sam's quite computer savvy, I wonder how he's going to find him.
Will be interesting when he does. I also can't help but wonder how much Laura will remember when they get her back...
Onward again! :D
| Nvrmore chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Very interesting first chapter... I'm very tired (longer week than most), but parts of what was happening alluded me - once he got to the car... or... tried to get to the car. I'll have to go back and read it when I'm awake. :) (see me blush)
But what would cause Dean not to remember who he is? Why'd he in a hospital? And why would a Djinn be after him? And is Sammy there to save him? (or Laura? or both?)
On to the next chapter! :D
And I'm really curious since you've apparently started another story (did you finish this one) called John Doe. Does that mean he still doesn't know who he is? I know, I know. I'll have to read to find out. :D
| CatBeist chapter 3 . 6/16/2009
WOW lady ain't you just the super poster these days... I better get to work then!
Why doesn't Sammy know Dean doesn't know who he is? Oh nevermind cus when Sam found Dean he was in Djin-Kissing-Spell-Mode and between this they haven't really talked... okie I am on board :D I got to say I do really like it, just something cool about having Dean not knowing and Sammy being good old hunter having no clue his brother is... well at the moment not his brother... Ok let me get to the end here...
hey that wasn't TOO bad of a cliffly lady :D tchihi, I mean you cleared up the case... just not the other case there... I am actually loving this! :D SPLE... and it is also different than the warwerse even though it is part of it all it is different... as you said Dean is different when he doesn't have baggage, and apparently so is Laura too... Wonder where she went...?
And poor Sammy... Sif you have got to get this young man laid... he can not go on lusting after her... come on, that is like the "sacred rule of guys" never ever... you know...
Anyway! It is loved and I will get to John Doe sooner than later I hope :D
| sunnyjunedays chapter 3 . 6/15/2009
Hi, Great that Sam and Dean are together again even though Dean has no idea what Sam means to him and Laura appears to be in the same state of confusion as Dean. Does this mean that the both of them have been the victim of the Djinn or is there something else going on here.
Loved Dean's John Doe line at the end of this chapter.
Great to see this in my inbox today, can't wait to see how this is going to play out. Take care. x
| Nana56 chapter 3 . 6/14/2009
So sorry to be so slow to read and review. Life's been a little chaotic at the moment. :) Homework, huh? Cool!
The boys are back together and Sam finally realizes that Dean's lost his memory! Wow! Glad they were able to work together to free Laura, tho. Who seems to fear them! She doesn't remember either? It sure seemed to me that it was trying to get her to call Dean, tho. Maybe someone else?
You really can do a bang up job at these complicated things! Love, love, love it!
BTW, where's MustardSeed? He should be taking care of her. Was she fully healed?
| Maz101 chapter 3 . 6/14/2009
So, Laura's a victim too - hmm, does that mean they're working together in some other dimension of reality somewhere? Sam's sure got a challenge ahead of him!
| nope nope not me chapter 3 . 6/14/2009
I am so glad you updated today. I was so bored. Loved the chapter, and I am curious as to what happens when Dean finds out that Sam is the other 'gay' guy who was with him at the motel. heh heh :) This story Is great and I cant wait to see where its going.
| SamDeanLover28 chapter 3 . 6/14/2009
| TraSan chapter 3 . 6/14/2009
I love how well the boys work together even when Dean can't remember anything about himself or his brother. Not even a glimmer of recognition.
The question I guess is - is it gone because of something the djinn did or is he actually in a djinn world?
Without his memories Dean is very vulnerable to the things out there that want to hurt them. Good thing Sammy's got all his pistons firing.
More when you can!
| sunnyjunedays chapter 2 . 6/13/2009
Hi, Poor Dean, suffering from burnt skin and having no memory as to how he got it or even who he is or why he's at the motel. The motel receptionist was a little less than helpful in that respect although i love that she thinks Sam and Dean are a couple, which they are, but not in that sense.
Loved Dean finding the jeans too long!
What's with Sammy's thoughts on Laura? Once Dean's back to being Dean he's not going to be too happy about that and speaking of Laura, she's not faring too well right now.
Sammy's going to have his work cut out for him if he doesn't get back before Dean disappears on him.
Have i told you how much i love this story. Really, really looking forward to more. x
| TraSan chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
LOL - poor Dean. No memory, Laura's kidnapped, his sunburned, hurt and oh yeah, once again, they motel staff think he and Sam are a couple. Dude can't even catch a break when he doesn't know who he is.
Sam better hurry, or he's gonna be looking for Laura AND Dean.
| CatBeist chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
Before I move on I have to say that this opening, with the first chapter is seriously wicked cool! Actually right now I am thinking that I would LOVE for you to write some sort of scifi amnesia story... :) That would be cool, and you could put all sorts of mystery in there... :D oh I got geeked now... sorry I know you have so many projects but you do so well!
Sammy boy... Laura is Dean's... that is a no go Sammy!
Is Sammy in heat? LOL... some sort of Deamon heat or something... well you never know with you :) ALL IS POSSIBLE :D
Oh I really do like that you used the ring thing! Actually I loved that you used the ring thing! Very nice detail from the opening to the middle :D
Hihi poor Dean... you are playing gay on him woman! What is your DEALIO? Djin giving him makeout sessions and him now thinking Sammy is his "man"... lol... Anyway I am thinking this is wicked cool, and kinda Memento-ish :D Loving it ! Awesome job and looking forward to getting to the last chapter!
| SamDeanLover28 chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
hee love it! :)
| Maz101 chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
Strange...I thought I'd reviewed before but now realise I didn't, which is annoying because I KNEW it was a djinn. Ha!
I am really beginning to worry about Sam's Laura obsession - it is going to end VERY badly at some point.