Reviews for where did the hokage go
lou2003us chapter 12 . 12/15/2017
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
Phoenixlord42 chapter 2 . 11/25/2017
Javian Harriott chapter 1 . 7/15/2017
The whole apology is stupid. I mean look when one grows up with no one they to show them any form of love or acceptance they dont care what the source or how it comes as long they avknowelege them even if negative, in this case Sakura abuse. If one hides and don't make thier presentence know, in this case Hinata, it as good as they not thier so it should really be her apologising
GiftedSage chapter 1 . 4/30/2017
why did it have to be a naruto and himawari story...there so many...Ymwhy couldn't this be a naruto and temari...good story tho and a few spelling errors but good tho...ima just image that Hinata is temari or is temari naruto real good in this?
Last true Naruto fan chapter 1 . 12/23/2016
My suggestion to the author of the story is seek professional help with your abandonment issues and get over it I could tell the way you write the story of personal issues that you need to get over that's why I have Naruto fanfic exist this is not a Naruto fanfic this is someone we live in bad traffic past events of their own life and trying to translate to an anime grow up
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 7/13/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 7/10/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 7/9/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 7/9/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
angerman chapter 12 . 6/8/2016
bad ending
narutoyugitofuu chapter 12 . 3/29/2015
Have Naruto talk to Chi and find out they are related and wave ally with uzusio
herart chapter 2 . 12/22/2014
Okay... In this chapter says that Naruto thought of Sakura as a sister but in the previous one says he had asked her out for dates? And also, grammar needs a bit of improving.
Dracoessa chapter 12 . 8/21/2014
I hope kumo and konoha gets burned to the foundations.
Dracoessa chapter 11 . 8/21/2014
*baps itachi on the back of his head then runs like the wind while cackling up a storm*
Dracoessa chapter 10 . 8/21/2014
*cackles insanely at pedo-teme's losing it's top kanoichi*
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