Reviews for Not Fair
Shlayne chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
ROFLMAO the end! Loved it!
Insane Muse chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
All men (Alien included) are the same lmao!
januaryfreeze92 chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Haha! That was fantastic! Great job!
writingrox12 chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Hahaha. That made me laugh. "You may perform the act again in the future."

Although at times, I thought Spock was a little out of character (I don't think he'd be that selfish), it was overall good. 9/10.
PrettyPopSugar chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Dickhead Spock is a dickhead! What an asshole!

“Perhaps performing this ritual in my company would prove more beneficial.” Asshole.

Brilliant given the prompt. This story captures the " little thing that's getting in the way...," remarkably :o)

Roze Haun chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
aw man, what a dick.
siggyhahn chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Tee hee. As irritating as I'm sure Uhura found it, I found Spock's logic to be quite entertaining! Also, it was pretty hot imagining Spock's naivete when it comes to sex.
shopgirl6 chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
this was hilarious! at the beginning of the story i was like, "wtf 's up with Spock?" but this story turned out funny!
Tioman chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
lol this is so funny and just sounds right! I really loved it! you did however forget to put "the" before "future" in spocks last sentance. i hope to read more of your work!
Bandbabe chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
LMAO! This funny and hot. Very original.
mhgood chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
This is great! I love how it doesn't end all perfect. Very well written. I'm adding this to my C2, "Oh, for the love of Spock."
RachelKarenGeller chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Spocks an idiot in this that clearly doesnt know a lot about human sexual interactions or maybe hes just very vulcan, intriguing. nice job
AtanaM chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Oh my. Well I too have always pictured Spock as a terrific lover... but maybe he wasn't always. You gotta start somewhere and I can totally see Nyota having to "teach" him how to please her. With repeated practice... I'm sure he'll be fine.

My co workers are looking at me like I lost my mind though... What with the choking and spewing of Coffee I just did.

Well done (and terribly funny)
Dr Spleenmeister chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Oh dear me *Wipes away tears* smut isn't supposed to be as funny as that! How you manage to mix smokin' sex with laugh out loud humour is just genius!
Mia chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Hah hah, different but in such a great way. And it was cute to see how Spock assumes uhura will one day have his children.
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