|Reviews for A twisted reality|
| ViciousNightGoddess chapter 4 . 10/12/2012
what she see what she see
| KitKat0106 chapter 5 . 4/22/2011
i cant say i was able to follow exactly what was going on. why was edward foaming at the mouth, why did he suddenly snap out of what ever craziness he was in, what exactly happened to esme and rosalie, how did four vampires not stand a chance against edward. why didnt the wolves attack when the vampires crossed over the line. Im sorry i was just left very confused. One of the previous reviewers stated that if you had slowed it down a bit and put a little more detail it would have been a lot better and i agree, u do have the makings of a very intruiging story i think the exicution just needed a bit of work.
| SOS9494 chapter 5 . 12/28/2009
wow this fanfic is awesome cant wait for the next chapter!
| minako366 chapter 4 . 12/19/2009
little curious. How did Bella have her truck at school? I thought that she rode with Alice?
| Rain Addict CM chapter 5 . 8/21/2009
dude i hate Edward, why didnt they kick his ass? he hurt ESME! ( good story though
| f chapter 5 . 7/17/2009
that ending sukd!u should have made something up like "they found there body parts hidden in the trunk of his volvo"or something.
| cullengirl chapter 3 . 7/17/2009
I LOVE IT SO FAR! please make more
| LolittaDeath chapter 5 . 6/16/2009
venom heals everything thats why vampiresar soo beutiful everyenegy heals except for a bite mark
| sorryguyssssssss chapter 5 . 6/15/2009
this story was kool
ill read ur belice series
| Naitan chapter 5 . 6/15/2009
Yes, you ae a bit biased, aren't you? Personally, I think that while it's not the worst I've read, it's sure as hell not the best... But then, I've been reading stories of a really good calibre, too, so I'm biased there, too.
The whole thing was a lot... rushed. If you'd slowed it down a bit, provided more detail, etc. it would have been a lot better. There was potential, and some was carried through, but not all of it.
| Draconian Dragonfly chapter 5 . 6/14/2009
me likey me needy more
blessed be Emryk
| Bobbyjohn chapter 5 . 6/14/2009
Wow, That gore scene... was fan-fucking-tastic! I got a complete visual. Very good imagery my friend. I congratulate u on finishing your story. And I wish you only the best on all of your future stories.
| ShiroFlake chapter 5 . 6/14/2009
Good job !
Please hurry up with next chapter.
| Team Alice-Bella chapter 5 . 6/14/2009
| Naitan chapter 4 . 6/14/2009
I feel guilty now, I'm stealing everyone's hits. I always thought that ten thousand hits was a small amount, 'til now...
No prolonging. I like better versions. Better versions rule.