|Reviews for Without a Trace|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/1
| twilightxxpotterxxvampirexxx chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Second chapter please
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Great, start please give us more.
| HarryPotterFan4 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
I really like this and would like to see what happens next.
| rebecca chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Okay what next?
I like it
| KMCCL3 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
I like this story but u should make the kidnapper kidnapp the rest of the u make a story where theres a killer like scream where he calls his victim
| thatgingerprincess143 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
"Yes... I have a better map in the car though, just come over and you can point out the streets I should take."
Naoko shrugged. "Okay."
She walked over..."
THAT IS SOOO STUPID DOESNT SHE KNOW NEVER TO DO THAT!
okay this is really good i want to read more
and are you sure there was a Nick in the movie? who was he played by? because i cant remebr a nick.
| JenD16 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Please update this story. It is really good, I can't wait to read more.
| surferchamp3 chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
This sounds like it could be interesting!
| Im-On-A-Roll chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
This is so exciting! And even better, it's about Naoko, my fav of the North kids! Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update!
Also, not to be rude or anything, but you kinda mispelled a lotta the other kids names. Instead of Joanie, Eli, Lao, JJ, and Nick, you shoulda spelled em Joni, Elly, Lau, Jimi, & Mick. But other that that, really great job. Once again, please update!
| tic toc on the clock chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
that was really good cant wait to read the second chapter
| csciacca939 chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
oh my gosh!i love it whats happens next?