|Reviews for On His Blindness|
| Etchers chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Your prose is so poetic and brilliant.
It's great to read fanfic that isn't the usual SasuNaruesque bullshit.
You're really talented.
I wish I could give some constructive criticism but alas there is nothing really I can say.
| U-Verb chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
I thought that you delved into their personalities quite deeply. I loved the reiteration of the first two questions at the end of the story and the grouping of ants, mushrooms, tree roots... I enjoyed the contrast of ants and sun to the slow, contemplative nature of the tree. Do the ants insinuate the lack of conscience with killing or that everyone plays a part with society/is a part of? Or could it allude to something entirely different? Your story is full of AWESOMENESS (due to your absolutely fantastic writing skills and Shisui). I’ll remember you