So beautiful. That's all I have to say

Love it

It seems a lifetime when I started reading your story. I could barely finish the chapters before the responsibilities call me again. It took me months to finish all the reading.
Well, I'm going here to congratulate you. You know I love your stories, I added almost all your plots of Naruto and Sasuke in my favorites. My dream is to write like you, because your script is fabulous!
See ya!
Nathasha.

Just wow. That is all I have to say. It was that good. Keep it up :)

Wow, it's really refreshing to read Naruto from a different perspective. He's usually the really good guy and I always love him in most fanfiction but in this one I really hate him, not because of the way you write him (you write him absolutely beautifully) but because he's a total douche bag that doesn't respect women. I mean taking secret pics of them while naked/getting changed and selling them? That's fucking sick. I hope Naruto changes in the up coming chapters, I really want to like him :c

This was good, very good. I really enjoyed the way you described the scenes and characters, and I think you did a really good job with the OC's. There was a lot more to them than I originally thought there would be, nicely played. Your action scenes were pretty much spot on, I literally could picture all the crazy going on in my mind, I envy you for being able to write it out so well!
You're a great writer, and I really do admire your style and the way your words flow together. I did have a few problems when reading this, but don't take offense because I just want to help :)
Your description of the story is not at all what I was expecting, so perhaps it might be a good idea to state that this story is an AU. Although I did enjoy reading it very much. And the only other problem I had was that I believe Sasuke as a character to be less likely the one to chase Naruto. Instead of vice-versa. Canon Sasuke is unbelievably selfish and cruel, which as the character you've portrayed Sasuke as in this fic is a lot softer around the edges. He cares far too much for Naruto and his friends in this story, something that I'm unable to picture the Canon Sasuke doing. I guess that's what makes it fanfiction though.
Either way, I applaud you on this story and I hope you don't take any of my criticism to heart. Only trying to help you improve a bit. Thank you for such a good read!

I loved this story...it was awesome!

Dear God I'm whoozing with adrenaline here! This is awesome, really. I can't help but squeal in delight every time something happens! And those fighting scenes... A-MA-ZING! This story is really, really awesome... (By the way, I love how you names Killer Bee, Kirabi... Great idea)

OK, first thing. THIS IS AWESOME. Haha! I kind of found this accidentally and the summary really drew me in and so I clicked on the link...and read the whole thing in one ago. Bwahaha.

I honestly thought Sasuke would get his "demands" but Naruto proved once again to be the most unpredictable person. He only agreed to join the club...if Sasuke agreed to take back his demands. That is BRILLIANT. And yeah, Naruto is AWESOME. He's a brilliant fighter and I guess Sasuke made a good choice in 'asking' Naruto to join the club.

Naruto going to Sasuke's house to thank Sasuke ended up him having dinner with the Uchiha family and getting along better with Sasuke is definitely one of my favourite scenes! And when Kiba confessed and Sasuke got jealous...woah. So much drama. It took a while for Naruto to fully accept his feelings for Sasuke and I did feel glad when Sasuke confessed and his feelings were returned. *grins*

Another thing that I loved was Naruto hanging out with Taka. Usually authors will stick him with the usual gang like Shikamaru, Kiba, Chouji and others but seeing Naruto with Taka made me smile. I think in canon, he'll get along well with Sugeitsu, Juugo and to a certain extent, maybe Karin. They are from the same clan after all. And it's a no-brainer that the only person Sasuke remorely pays attention to is Naruto. Bwahaha.

Thanks for writing such an awesome fic! I really enjoyed it!

PS: I enjoy your KKM fics as well! I was so surprised to see that you are the same author that wrote some of my favourite KKM fics!

i find it exceedingl interesting that this au has chakra and jutsu

Interesting... so there is jutsu in this universe too. The same as the Naruto universe.

Normally if a story like this is finished I don't leave a comment, nothing to wait for because its finished therefor no comment but this story...it was great. So Here. I'm leaving a comment :D

I must say. I know ALOT more curse words now that ive finished this story :D thanks lol hahaha

Aww! I was hoping for another sex scene! I loved it though!

Just gotta say this was one of the many good SN fics I've read \O/ Kinda disappointed there wasn't another scene where Sasuke and Naruto in bed at the last chapter though :P

This one, is by far, one of my favourite fanfictions ever. It's so well made and the nervous butterflies Sasuke and Naruto had... it was so sweet. Thank you for taking time to write this piece of art and it has been my pleasure to read this story. I liked the fighting even if I'm not very much into fighting scenes but your style of writing completely captured my intrest. The butterflies were amazing, it really gave your story something special. Also, Kiba's crush on Naruto was really cool. New guilty pleasure pairing? I think yes. Although nothing can win over SasuNaru! ;3 Shine on, amazing one!