Reviews for Gain
Nostalgic Beauty chapter 3 . 2/11/2016
Aww, stopped right before we got our explanation. The story has a lot of potential. I look forward to you taking an interest in it again.
Lumiere97 chapter 3 . 10/20/2015
This is great :) I really like your writing. Keep up the good job.
AFineMess101 chapter 3 . 9/13/2015
Dear Gods this is beautiful. I adore Kazeko, (nice thing with her name by the way). She's funny and sarcastic and all-around badass. Kakashi is a delightful asshole and I love the fact you're not just going to have them fall in love after 3 chapters. You're right, it's absolutely ridiculous to have somebody who's been hurt so terribly immediately fall in love with someone. Also, your grammar and spelling is fucking fantastic. Please update soon! The plot sounds really interesting!
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 2 . 8/18/2014 human...*faints from brain overuse*
YukikoKitamura66 chapter 3 . 5/14/2014
I love your story :)
rachel101448 chapter 3 . 4/26/2014
Great story so far! I love how you've made her Ibiki's younger sister because he's definitely one of the characters who I wished we learned more about in the manga and got to see more of so I'm looking forward to any brother-sister bonding/threatening to torture her for letting Takara get injured scenes between the two. Kazeko is definitely an interesting character and her teammates seem cool as well. I really like her little crush on Asuma and hope to see more scenes with them, but like you mentioned at the beginning of the chapter, I wouldn't want to see any love triangle involving him. Eventually he'll be with Kurenai and he and Kazeko would be better off as friends. As for Kakashi, he is written very realistically and in character and I'm glad that you're planning on taking things with him and Kazeko at a slow and realistic pace. I can't wait to read more and find out about why those men were after Kazeko. Great writing and hopefully you'll update soon! XOXO
feketemacska chapter 2 . 1/20/2014
I think you did a really good job so far. I like the way you integrated Kazeko as an OC and I would love to read some more of this eventually.
Angelbloodlover chapter 3 . 5/20/2013
Wow, your story looks very good! Kakashi's personality was done very well and I enjoyed his interactions with Kazeko. :) I wonder what the explanations will be! :p

Good luck with the next chapter!

nevvy chapter 3 . 2/18/2013
What just happened?! I hope Ibiki is all right too (for some reason). Next chapter should be good! Re: Kazeko's crush on Asuma- I think it's cute. It really seems like a schoolgirl crush (so far) but I'm sure (hoping) he only sees her as a friend or little sister type. I still haven't pegged down Kazeko's style in my head, and I'm a strong believer in complimentary relationships (good ol' opposites attrach), so we'll see where it goes!
Piacine chapter 3 . 2/14/2013
Ooooh, me likey!
Marzipan chapter 2 . 1/31/2013
Kazeko smiled meekly. "Thank you, Copycat."
So awkward!
Human cat...ibiki, you dawg. Or should I say cat? That sucked;)
nevvy chapter 2 . 1/12/2013
The really amusing thing is that my boyfriend accuses me of the same thing with my cat. Completely false, I assure you. Can't wait to read Ibiki's explanation for this one, lol.
kawaii-teddy chapter 2 . 1/12/2013
That, was fricking awesome. Man, the last line got me. "Holy shit, Ibiki was fucking his cat all along" cracked me up so hard that I woke up my sis from her nap XD Then the words sunk in, and I was all like "Woahhh..."
Harumi-Hime chapter 2 . 1/12/2013
Oh my
nevvy chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Wait! Did Takara follow him in!? LOL. Love the fic, more please!
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