|Reviews for When Lightning Strikes|
| taylor.hall.5815 chapter 26 . 10/7/2013
Please update soon because this is getting really good
| Anon chapter 26 . 6/3/2013
I like your Paul a lot :)
It's nice to read a story were the imprinted couple has real life issues (such as college and career moves), I find it hard to believe that even in Meyer's world everything would always only be about fighting the Volturi over and over again. I could really relate to your Rachel and the dilemma of loving someone so much, that you just have to postpone or alter your other plans. I think the compromising and fitting different dreams together is the most difficult part of "forever", not deciding when to say "I love you" or which restaurant to go on a date to.
| jessewillard55 chapter 5 . 12/29/2011
I know it has been eons since you wrote when lightning strikes but I am just now finding and reading. LOVE IT! I am fairly new to fanfic and have found the best way to locate really good stories is to use the favorite list from authors I like...I get to skip the JUNK and go straight to the good stuff such as yours.
I love Paul. Mr. Grumpy is really all fluff. I promised myself I would just preview this story for later...have SO much to do today...BUT I am now headed into chapter 6 and asking for the outtakes. Had a quick look at your other stories and have added you to MY favorite author list. Look forward to reading those also. Dont forget the outtake if you still have and THANKS for the fun. Debbie
| Mehghla chapter 2 . 12/11/2010
well, I haven't read the rest yet but I like it so far. Plenty of details. (I'm a details freak.)
| noamg chapter 26 . 11/8/2010
I love how you dealt with the whole too-large-pack issue and the emotion you put into it. But I didn't understand one detail about Rachel's comments about Renesmee - she's disgusted that she's going to be mature by the age of seven, when at this point in the story, she should still be worried about her dying of old age at fifteen and leaving Jacob crushed.
| laurazuleta18 chapter 26 . 11/3/2010
Please update soon!
Missed this fic!
I love Brady and Collin! It's though, cause I'm in love with ur Brady, but on other fics Collin is my true love..lmao
| lavishone chapter 26 . 11/1/2010
Aww...It does seem pretty sad...I'm just kind of stunned...
I wonder how things will change w/Quil and Embry joining Jake.
Ready for your update whenever you are!
| Annuska chapter 26 . 11/1/2010
Nice, long chapter. I hope Rachel and Paul will go to meet Nessie soon and make peace, having the siblings argue is a bit sad. It will be good to read about the Volturi from this point of view, but I am sure it will be painful for imprints and their wolves.
| Mikita chapter 26 . 10/31/2010
Great chapter! Lots of interaction and chances going on. O really like where you are taking this story. Can't wait to see Jake's new pack! He really ought to talk work his sister and make up. Please keep posting, I'm really interested in seeing how this story continues!
| S K B C chapter 26 . 10/31/2010
awwwww the ending is sooo sad :(
amazing chapter tho! please update soon!
| twifantasyfan chapter 26 . 10/31/2010
nice one. Have to say I'm looking forward to seeing how they react to finding out Nessie's in danger. More soon please.
| MandyJane chapter 26 . 10/31/2010
awwwww thats so sad! I love Quil! And I hope Rachel and Jacob make up soon :( but then again I knwo how long it can take to forgive a younger brother! I LIKED this chapter, so you should WRITE ANOTHER ONE. SOON. But do your essay first, maybe? Actually do a chapter - I have procrastination to be getting on with.
| Annuska chapter 25 . 10/26/2010
So sweet of Paul to organize a date and it was worth the trouble ;) pack members comments, lol! This is a really nice story :) What are you plans with it?
| Annuska chapter 24 . 10/26/2010
That was harsh for 16 year old, but their relationship is stronger now. Jared was giving some real mature advices, those boys need to grow fast.
| Annuska chapter 21 . 10/26/2010
Another view on Jacob's imprinting, this is fun :D