Reviews for Outtakes Fate is a Cruel Harpy
patch138 chapter 4 . 8/17/2009
poor Anna, there's so much to her that we didnt get a chance to see...Im so glad you're writing her!

~Tiffany
Verolina chapter 3 . 7/27/2009
I love this outtake. Can't wait for the others...:)
Verolina chapter 2 . 7/27/2009
aw...so sad :(
The-Mixed-Up-Girl chapter 3 . 7/22/2009
humm... I love it!
patch138 chapter 3 . 7/21/2009
amazing outtake! Looking forward to more of Annas POV!

~Tiffany
marykat chapter 2 . 6/28/2009
Excellent! my fave line by far:

-My knight in shining armor came to me in a demon form.

I love how you played both sides of Edward's persona into that scene, as well as his showing that what he feared the most actually happened - he appeared like a demon to her.

and i totally felt like i was in the alley with her, being accosted by the drunk - great vivid descriptions!
marykat chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
I'm properly reviewing this chappy now :)

I loved seeing Rose's side to this part of the story! and a little insight to her perspective on the cullens prior to her joining them was great!

the flower stuff was priceless...so delicious every single time it comes up XD

lovely chappy and I love the idea of the outtakes
The-Mixed-Up-Girl chapter 2 . 6/28/2009
interesting
patch138 chapter 2 . 6/27/2009
I love her side! Great job!

~Tiffany
twoquestionmarks chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
Lol. It was good. Good to see a little more of the new brunette. I can't think of any suggestions for other scenes right now. I am thinking that the Age of Edward contest is perfect for you though. :)
Verolina chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
hahahahahaha omg hilarious!

i enjoyed this outtake very much! :)
The-Mixed-Up-Girl chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Nice, I really liked it a lot!
robbsweetangel chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
I love this. I was snickering at the end. Got to love Edward. LOL. I can't wait to read other outtakes on this story.. Great work.