Reviews for Outtakes Fate is a Cruel Harpy
patch138 chapter 4 . 8/17/2009
poor Anna, there's so much to her that we didnt get a chance to see...Im so glad you're writing her!

Verolina chapter 3 . 7/27/2009
I love this outtake. Can't wait for the others...:)
Verolina chapter 2 . 7/27/2009 sad :(
The-Mixed-Up-Girl chapter 3 . 7/22/2009
humm... I love it!
patch138 chapter 3 . 7/21/2009
amazing outtake! Looking forward to more of Annas POV!

marykat chapter 2 . 6/28/2009
Excellent! my fave line by far:

-My knight in shining armor came to me in a demon form.

I love how you played both sides of Edward's persona into that scene, as well as his showing that what he feared the most actually happened - he appeared like a demon to her.

and i totally felt like i was in the alley with her, being accosted by the drunk - great vivid descriptions!
marykat chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
I'm properly reviewing this chappy now :)

I loved seeing Rose's side to this part of the story! and a little insight to her perspective on the cullens prior to her joining them was great!

the flower stuff was delicious every single time it comes up XD

lovely chappy and I love the idea of the outtakes
The-Mixed-Up-Girl chapter 2 . 6/28/2009
patch138 chapter 2 . 6/27/2009
I love her side! Great job!

twoquestionmarks chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
Lol. It was good. Good to see a little more of the new brunette. I can't think of any suggestions for other scenes right now. I am thinking that the Age of Edward contest is perfect for you though. :)
Verolina chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
hahahahahaha omg hilarious!

i enjoyed this outtake very much! :)
The-Mixed-Up-Girl chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Nice, I really liked it a lot!
robbsweetangel chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
I love this. I was snickering at the end. Got to love Edward. LOL. I can't wait to read other outtakes on this story.. Great work.