|Reviews for The Three 'S's|
| Krystal Jaymes chapter 3 . 10/2/2011
Oh, if you would only update...
| weirdstar007 chapter 3 . 7/20/2009
| Sunnie79 chapter 3 . 7/13/2009
HaHa! Naughty, naughty Bella!
Hm... but how long is Edward going to be able to just sit and watch? LOL
| delilah69 chapter 3 . 7/12/2009
very sneaky! i like it!
| teambellaedward chapter 3 . 7/12/2009
that was great :)
| teambellaedward chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
that was cool :)
| teambellaedward chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
That was a great first chapter :)
| sillyaddict13 chapter 3 . 7/12/2009
| Sunnie79 chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
Oh I think I know why Bella has a new found fondness to frozen items...LOL... I bet it reminds her of Edward's touch! LOL
So when is Charlie leaving? LOL
| BaDRomanceGaGaKOL chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
| BaDRomanceGaGaKOL chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
| kaybear400 chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
AH! I HAVE TO KNOW WhAAT HAPPENS!
| Sunnie79 chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
I think your story has a great start... I'm not one to give suggestions to how a story should go though.
One thing I do enjoy reading though are DETAILS... like, as an example, instead of saying something along the lines of "and then they kissed"... well, how was that kiss? Was it deep and passionate? Did it set off butterflies in the belly? Was it so deep and intense that they both got aroused? Was there something different to THIS kiss than prior kisses? See what I mean about the details? LOL
But so far I like where your story seems to be heading - I just look forward to reading it and seeing how it all plays out! :-)