Reviews for Adjustments
Rem chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
sounded like starwars but it seems good enough :) I'm gonna go read the rest now...
Angel Of Darkness And Light chapter 30 . 6/22/2010
I've read all of your story so far and I must say you are an awesome author!

In this chapter, one of my favorite part was with Mihara and Reyson. Ah, poor Mihara! She has two boys on her tail! lol

Have you thought of kind of doing two seperate chapters or whatever on who Mihara ends up with? Kind on two seperate epilouge's?

Predator Drone chapter 30 . 6/10/2010
not a lot of time to review this, but,...

Suspenseful chapter.

good chapter.

great chapter.

and i just loved that Phoenics history!
TheSilverHairedMaiden chapter 30 . 6/7/2010
HOLY FLYING SOTHE ON A UNICORN! Reyson KNOWS Mihara loves Ranulf and he STILL kisses her? Th- But! And-? Mihara- you know-! With! And him! BAH! DIE REYSON! HOW COULD YOU? OF ALL PEOPLE! ROOOOAAAAARRR! Good chapter, by the way. I can't wait for Harmony to have a larger roll, this getting gooood xD NIce bit about the Horses and the snow, too, that was cute! And MIhara knows about her dads history know, so we're moving forward, as politicians say. I have decided to replace my lost supply of infinate gold stars with equally thrilling organic pot scubbers! Fu-un! Can't wait for next chapter, as long as Reyson KEEPS HIS HANDS TO HIMSELF! *swat*
Brookie4Cookies chapter 30 . 6/6/2010
Welllll, Poor TIBARN! He's such a badass though... Well anyways, I think I'll have Sylvia with her original love...but that doesn't mean that Shoen will be forgotten! If the people will it, he can have fluff moments, but it's all up to you, the author~3
Cata-nee chapter 29 . 5/5/2010
It was so cute!

I think I love Shoen! No tliek love i mea like if he were a real nintendo generated character- THAT HE WOULD BE AWWESOME!

I'd use Mihara too becuse they need more bird laguz!
O NOES ashera is up to bad stuff ah
CONGRATUALTIOSN Or however the eff u spell it!
Congratsto mh because i am finally trying to type mah story!
God i got some bad fingers lookit all the grammer mistakes!
CYA :3
Predator Drone chapter 29 . 5/4/2010
i knew that otter wearing earth clothes was harmony!
anyway, they are so freakin lucky they get a snow ball fight! I live in Southern californioa, so, no snow. :(
Anyway... Ashera is so mean. I hate her. When i first got radiant dawn i knew she was mean and bad and cruel and... a goddess? I actually thought she was some sort of bird with the feathers, but i'm getting off topic.
Anyway, plz update soon
TheSilverHairedMaiden chapter 29 . 5/3/2010
firstly: sorry about the flashbacks thing, my computer doesnt read bold print. - so Person Who Owns Sylvia doesnt want Sylvia/Shoen? well its your story, so i demand to dictate it!

snowball fight was awesome, loved that... but this chapter made me realize you seem to have a... fetish for having pretty females found unconcious randomly XD also, dude- what happened to the other tribes? we havent heard from them in so long im not even sure this is the same story. RANULF-DIE-HARD-BANANA-FORCE-RANGERS, UNITE! still lovin the story. oh, and, how come only girls are abducted from earth? not just this story, but most all of them? huh...

aw... this review sounded pretty mean... where'd the randomness go? *slams head on mantle* *oozes green slime*
Brookie4Cookies chapter 29 . 5/3/2010
OMG, no Harmony!*huggles her new otter-self*
Sylvia: OH HELL NO! REXBOLT!*almost hits Ike*...well crap.
Thanks so much for adding Sylvia, it's sounds like people like her!
EternalMusic'13 chapter 28 . 4/30/2010
Love it Nissy! ...And also... Sorry Stini for not telling you about my account. You told me that you felt left out. Grr.. Stupid parental controls... Anyways... Keep it coming! XD
Cata-nee chapter 28 . 4/19/2010
Lol i wanted to wait to be teh hundreth reviewe4r but apparently noone would cave and id not be on for another moth or so.

this is the nly time we didnt update on teh same day :D

And dont worry about teh updating thing... lol i havent updated in like...


Anyways, i working on it, bit-by-bit.


What was I gonna say?

Oh, i hope some big drama or action occurs in teh next chapter LOL!

knowlee chapter 28 . 4/13/2010
Man, it's been a while since I reviewed this story. I'm getting lazy...

Aww, poor Shoen. Getting wet is not a good thing when it's cold outside. At least Irea healed him later on. Yay! Ranulf is in the story again! :D I was beginning to think that we wouldn't see him for a few chapters.

Zelena...ALIVE! O.O Now that was something that I wasn't expecting. It'll be interesting to see how this new twist will play out.

Anyways, once again, this is another excellent chapter. :) I hope to see another one sometime soon, but don't rush yourself. Good things are worth the wait. :) (Oh, and btw, I second that idea of having the pairing of ShoenxSylvia in the story.)
Predator Drone chapter 28 . 4/13/2010
shoen's better, irea's better! Mihara's. better, and Zelena is alive!

Well, sorta.

Cant wait till next chapter
Lumos Fabula chapter 28 . 4/12/2010
Much better flowing-ness stuff of the progression of the story. ;)

I still can't believe you can manage to keep up with all the characters. I get so confused when I do that with OotE. O.o

Which I may or may not think about typing up more to. Soonish.


Gosh, your people are always getting sick! Like someone else I know...

Good writing, get more action! Now! ACTIONACTIONACTION

Love you!

Trueblade Hinata chapter 28 . 4/11/2010
Another great chapter!

I'm glad that Leanne and Naesala finally have a child.

I hope lady Zelena will be alright.

Keep up the good work!
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