|Reviews for just to see you smile|
| homeric chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
This was charming - sweet to see Severus opening up to someone, and the acknowledgement that the moment between them would pass, even if the memories dont.
The idea that they only shared one kiss was rather bittersweet, but fit the story, I think.
Nice job :)
(P.S. at the moment you haven't got your "accept anonymous reviews" option turned on. If that's deliberate then ignore this, but it's easy to miss when you start out posting fics so I figured I'd give you a "heads up").
| themixedbreed chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
you rock. your gonna be a star one day. love u magen!
| Naflower05 chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
this is good. i hope your going to continue it. ]
| jadedpisces chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Very sweet. The last two paragraphs were written perfectly. I just loved the image of two teenagers enjoying a perfect and innocent moment together without a care in the world, especially knowing what the future will bring for one of those characters. Thank you for sharing.