Reviews for An Unnatural Journey
Inferna Firesword chapter 14 . 10/18/2009
Ah, Reep; the story's just as great here as it is on BZP. Maybe better; Idunno yet. P

Anyway, I eagerly look forward to the sequel.
TigerToa chapter 14 . 9/18/2009
that was a really good story.

so, did you add yourself in to the ending there?
TigerToa chapter 10 . 9/18/2009
yay! they're... wait, fired? at her? WHAT'S GOING ON?
TigerToa chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Trell's cool! I love how he can be nervous but stay calm and not completely freak out.

Cedrak's an interesting character, too...
Athena's Assassin chapter 14 . 9/11/2009
Ooh... A sequel?

Your No. 1 fan,

A Lurking Demon of the Night chapter 13 . 7/12/2009
Excellent! I agree that this is one of the best Bionicle fanfics I've read!

Great Job!
sweetcelina chapter 6 . 6/18/2009
Wow, I'm in suspense now. Great story so far! Keep up the good work! [Can't wait for the next chapter!]
dark raven0 chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
I really enjoyed how you started off the story and introduced the characters, it was way more natural than some other fics that I've read :) nice work!
Athena's Assassin chapter 1 . 6/16/2009

Big wow.

This is probably the best Bionicle fic I've ever read. It has good descriptions, a good plot, and good characters. Plus, you usually update twice a week.

Keep it up!