|Reviews for Overhead at the beach|
| Abandoned Account 111111111111 chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
Very good - I love how the narrator doesn't understand their vulgar English slang! Please write some more Bottom fics, the section is far too empty!
| FeministaCipher95182 chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
great story mate :D
| yeahyeahchani chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Laughed out loud when reading all of this lol
| Ferret Coldfinger chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Thank John for you! There is a dreaful definency in Bottom fanfic, and what there is is pathetic. Here you bring the full wonderful revolting richness of Eddie and Rich into the light- in this case the Calafornian sun. I notice you like to make Rik come out a lot. I must say I can't imagine why. It's not like there's EVER ANY indication that he's the SLIGHTEST bit femme.