|Reviews for Must Get Out|
| Catmint chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Absolutely fantastic. I loved all of it. Really good writing and characterisation and emotions and... well, everything, really!
| TonyandZivaUK chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
eughhhh im dead! this story is so amazing!
| Tiva4evaxxx chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
You really really really love making Ziva a mother don't you?
Haha. Well, i love it too :p
Brilliant little one shot :D
| CSIGurlie07 chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Quick question on this one... So why did Gibbs split them up again? At first glance it looks like he's just being a petty bastard (which we all know Gibbs ISN'T), but I know that something else was going on.
Why would it have been so bad for Tony to be there for Ziva through her 10-11 month pregnancy?
| LunaZola chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
This was cute, but how did the timing work out? Tony said it himself that pregnancies are 9 months not 10. You can't stretch that thing out, the doctors get pissed and cut that sucker right outta ya.
| God'srider chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
i really liked it! cute and i think he would be upset!
| twilightaddict4 chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
AW that is really cute i was coeing
| littlemisssunshinexx chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
SQUE! Oh my god. Best TivaKids fic EVER. (: oh my god! this is AMAZING! eh! going on favorites list...NOW. (along with your other AMAZING stories.)
| SemperFiNeverForget051909 chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
:D:D:D:D. "Pregnant Ziva and Tony as Dad" stories never cease to amaze me.
| debook210 chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
wow..that was beautiful...loved how it took me a while to figure out who was talking..and my favorite line was either "yes but when i mess up this badly, i think i'm allowed to be degrading"
or the end three lines..that was lovely.. i think you should leave it as is...it is beautiful!
| Silent Falling Rain chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Aww... triplets with Tony and Ziva! This was different, but it was good! And it was dedicated to me!
I can't believe Tony could be so blind! I'm happy that he does realize it before it's too late. And I loved the names! Talia, Tali, Anthony, Tony, and Adin reminded me of Ari. Although I'm not sure why...
I made my way into Ziva’s room, only to see her curled up on the bed the way I had left her, and a sad smile spread on my face. But it was replaced by a happy one as I sat down.
“You know, I’ve been thinking. And I’ve got to say that I think he is a jerk.” I said, and Ziva didn’t open her eyes. I leaned down so I was resting my chin on the bed in front of her face.
“And he’s not a good friend.” I said, and she opened her eyes. I could see the small tears on her eye lashes, and I reached up to whip them away.
“Why isn’t he?” She asked, and I frowned at her.
“He made you cry. He’s a jerk.” I said, and she laughed quietly.
That part was sweet. Thank you for this. This is just what I needed since I'm not feeling that great today. Okay, till the next time I talk to you.
| Penelope Louise chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Good afternoon :P
Awesome story! Love it!
| CheerChickx chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
This was awesome!
Abby was perfect.
Ohh favourite line...too many too choose from.
“You need to stop hitting yourself. You’re going to go brain dead.” He said, and I looked at him incredulously.
“Says the man how slaps me in the back of the head almost every day.” I said bitterly, and he smiled.
Lol loved it. Got to read more of your work :P
| OutCold chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
“From LA?” She asked, and I laughed.
“No, not from LA. From my apartment.” I said, and she nodded.
Really really well written, as per.
Off to retch.
| djEskimo chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Great work. Made me tear up :)