Reviews for Fly Guy
Oreal770 chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Heehee I wrote a fly fanfic the other day. Yours was very funny :) it made me' chuckle :)

Oreal
arwa chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
hilariousss!
Insanity's Servant chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
That was completely and utterly brilliant. Thank you for making my day :D

Poor Jerry..
Yabbit chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
lol umm what...

love it :P
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
LOL! Very funny!
Anon chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Gross.
blank chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Haha, what a lovely piece of amusing fiction ;)

Poor Jerry... (hehehehe)

Loved it! xxx
cooking-ninja18 chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
that was very amusing, i'm favoriting this!
moonagedaydreaming chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
HAHA! poor Jerry though... may he rest in peace.
F8WUZL8 chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
Lol, hehe. I miss Jerry.
hpenchantress chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
That was hilarious! Merlin swallowed the fly! Haha!

*a moment of silence for Jerry the fly*
Ellen-Thalia chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
LOL

Well funny. Good job.

Just curious, why was Gaius, ready to kill Merlin?
Girly 411 chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Love the summary. infuriating... XD

luvd that... D

hmm... twitching... repetition good. gets the point across in such a loverly way!

ooh... i hate it when flies taunt like that. makes me wanna squish them. Go get it Arthur!

*cheers*

XD

Hide Merlin, hide!

heehee... i can totaly see that. kinda like me when i'm distracted, i just say the first thing that comes to mind. and for Merlin.. yeah i do that too.. if i could fit under any of the beds. they're all so tiny and i'm not a little kid where the space under the bed was no match for my small frame. XD totally remember diving under my bed when i was small. too bad i grew up.

*cheers some more!*

AH! Merlin's panting his thanks while Arthur looks like an angry distracted cartoon swatting at annoyingly pesky flies. XD Hmm... what's Merlin gonna do now? I think he's gonna get rid of the fly for his buddy. XD

I wonder...

*continues to read*

Nope. *bursts out laughing!*

He smacked Merlin's face! aww... poor Merlin. and Arthur's still trying to kill that pesky fly. Love this fic! Great job!

And now's he's got a purple nose... and he swallowed that fly. wow... XD *sniggers*

that's priceless. and Arthur's concerned. aww...

oh wow... should have seen that coming. he smacks him in the back. poor Merlin goes flying yet but once again. echoing buzz...

love that. XP

too funny. and the fly just flies away before getting smooshed. oh wow... and Arthur's just satisfied as anything.

*sees bold print and reads*

Oh my gosh... JERRY! *keels over laughing*

that's just perfect... jerry... *shakes head and sighs, a broad grin spreading across face*

that's just amazing. XD

Love it.

“We are gathered here today to witness the burial our beloved fly, who for the purposes of today, shall be known as Jerry. Jerry was a king soul (not) and never infuriated innocent prince’s by buzzing around their head. No, Jerry would never fall to such low standards. He was a hard working fly and we all loved him (not). Rest in peace.”

oh my gosh.. that's just the most perfect way to end it.

*laughing so hard my sides hurt*

Great job! Keep it up!

random person - So Arthur.. you seemed annoyed before. What's on your mind?

Arthur - A pest more annoying than Merlin... THAT fly. *motions towards burial site*

random person - *facepalms*

Merlin - *rubs sore nose*

Keep it up! Can't wait to read more of your fics!
witty kitty01 chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
no, you just made me wet myself, this is that funny!

RIP jerry.
stundenglas chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Yeah, we all know how dear little flys can be annoying. Again, hilarious and very well written!
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