|Reviews for Kiss|
| leidi-chan chapter 2 . 1/14/2010
absolutely beautiful. :)
| Turk 4 Life chapter 2 . 1/4/2010
I dunno why but this story made me cry a little. They both know that their relationship's doomed and all, but they go on with the bet because of their stubborn addiction towards one another... Well that is what I see in this story xD!
Ah, this is well written, and I am happy that it shows the perspectives of the two people involved in the little bet.
| Sotwt Icehail chapter 2 . 11/29/2009
Funny and sweet with a tinge of sadness. Well done!
| acidninjacake chapter 2 . 10/4/2009
Cute but very well done. The concept and idea of having a chapter for both of their points of view is really interesting. I Liked it. :)
| Cinnamon Pink chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
I loved it! Especially how you mirrored the stories to show what was happening at the same time from the girls' POV and the boys' POV. I always feel so sad for Auron when the party realizes he's unsent. But I've always suspected there is more playfulness to Auron's personality than he lets on. This was a great story! Simple, yet effective and well characterized. Thanks for sharing it with us!
| Rikku Ronso chapter 2 . 7/16/2009
Lovely! I loved how you told it from 2 different ways - I also really liked the idea of Auron taking the bet! Cute story, I hope you make more :)
| lawlmacabre chapter 2 . 6/21/2009
Hm...I think Yuna or Rikku would be easiest, they're both so naive. They'd just stand there. xD Lulu wouldn't tolerate anyone cept Wakka puckering up to her. :D awesome job though. Your fics always hit the spot when I want some comic relief.
| lawlmacabre chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
Fifty gil? That's it? xD
| Glass Mermaid chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
This line was amazing. I loved it. It's very hard to satisfy my Aurikku wants, but this did it.
'She wonders if she will be able to taste him through all those other lives.'
| TheRecorder chapter 2 . 6/16/2009
I like how you matched up the two parts, using the same sentences, only changed to match the perspectives. I don't know why. Maybe I'm just amused by the similarity of the girls and boys. Maybe I like how it tells the same story in two distinct ways.
I don't know for sure, really. I just know I liked it. _
| LadyRuelleyn chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
this was great! thanks for making sure everyone was in character, i like how at first i thought auron was a jerk for accepting the bet in ch1 but then i saw ch2 and now i feel better. plz make more, your very talented!
| starry34 chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Well, that was certainly a different kind of Aurriku story. Gawd it was good but the ending... ouch! I don't know how I feel about that. Regardless, this was masterfully done and delightful to read. I liked the progression and how you didn't linger too long on anything. Thanks for the great read!
| thepiratejilt chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
wow, "male part member"? that's an interesting typo... -_- i meant, 'male partY member', lulz.
(sorry for spamming your reviews, but i just had to clear that up, lmao)
| thepiratejilt chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
ohmygaw, how i loved this; your brief description of each male part member (except kimarhi. what about kimarhi? :PP) at the beginning, little details like renaming the sitting style "Guado-style", and most of all THE ENDING. xDD! it was EPIC.
my only complaint: how did Rikku know about Auron and Tidus's doomed state? neither of them told anyone...
that's not really important though, i guess, when a story is this good. :)
favve, fo sho!
| Qualia Des chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
I'm not entirely sure I dig the humourous twist at the end, but irregardless, this is still a great story! Keep up the awesome work! :)