Reviews for The God's Weapon
ATHENA KISSED POSEDON chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
This was never planned, not their intention

She got so mad, not thinking, lost her discretion

it’s not what she’s used to, just wanted to shut him up

She’s pissed for he laughed in her face.

Athena kissed Poseidon and they liked it

The taste of his lips on hers

Athena kissed Poseidon just to try it

They hope Zeus didn’t mind it

It felt so wrong, it felt so right

Don't mean they’re in love tonight (or are they)

Athena kissed Poseidon and they liked it

They liked it

No, they still hate their guts don’t even think for a second they don’t

Just a dare he made her do, nothing emotional

It's not what she’s used to, not how she should behave

Her head gets so confused, hard to obey

Athena kissed Poseidon and they liked it

The taste of his lips on hers

Athena kissed Poseidon just to try it

They hope Zeus didn’t mind it

It felt so wrong, it felt so right

Don't mean they’re in love tonight (or are they)

Athena kissed Poseidon and they liked it

They liked it

Those gods are so magical

Smooth skin, soft lips, so kissable

Hard to resist, so touchable

Too good to deny it

It ain't no big deal, it's just a dare

Athena kissed Poseidon and they liked it

The taste of his lips on hers

Athena kissed Poseidon just to try it

They hope Zeus didn’t mind it

It felt so wrong, it felt so right

Don't mean they’re in love tonight (or are they)

Athena kissed Poseidon and they liked it

They liked it
Vampire Wings chapter 5 . 6/24/2009
Oh my gods are you sure your okay? I love this story. Oh and i was wandering if he girl was the god's weapon and if she is is she part of more than one god? So update as soon as you can.

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Random Person chapter 5 . 6/24/2009
do IVs hurt?
angel-abbs chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
Good story. I have an idea as to why she is like that. It is either the gods all somehow got together and had a child all together, which is impossible and wrong, or I think that it has something to do with the half-bloods having kids with other half-bloods. Therefore resulting in a child with all of the gods in her heritage's powers and looks. Zeus-her eyes, Posideon-her hair, Hades-her skin, Hephaestus-her skill, and Aphrodite-her beauty. If that makes any since or it could be the gods being weird like that or something else inteirly different, who knows, well except you. Love the story. Haha Percy got slapped.
MemorialFantasy chapter 2 . 6/9/2009
Hey everyone!

Thanks for the CC. I uploaded that Page of Authors Notes by mistake.

I'll try to add a chapter a dya, but that may not happen.

I wrote this for a writing class, so it's not really "T" yet.

Don't worry, the Percabeth is coming.

NOTE: I'm working on a story of Annabeth's life, so that may take some time.

If you have idea's for what should happen, PM me.

I don't Own PJO.
ZoeNightshade2214 chapter 2 . 6/8/2009
WAY TOO SHORT. even for a prologue this is really short. make this a lot longer and then repost it.
Nightmare Before Halloween chapter 2 . 6/8/2009
In fact, this plan WON'T WORK!
vanishing-cookie-crumbs chapter 2 . 6/8/2009
Hm. This was not very good. You had good vocabulary though. Some minor spelling and grammar mistakes but not all that noticeable.

Problems with chapters:

1. Making a chapter for author's notes is not allowed. Please inform yourself of the guidelines before you attempt to write a fanfic. Otherwise people may report you.

2. This was way too short. I understand that this is a prologue, but it needs a little more content. I hope your next chapters will be longer.

Good luck with your next chapters. Please take into consideration the comments I made. They were not flames but only CC.
Jake the Drake chapter 2 . 6/8/2009
Author notes aren't allowed as individual chapters. The story looks good, but the first chapter is too short.

~Moglin