|Reviews for Breathe Me|
| Janeway79 chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Just started and great story. Like how Bella is still a little klutzy, makes her more human. Can't wait to read more.
| Mika the Dark princess chapter 23 . 5/28/2013
| Guest chapter 22 . 5/6/2013
Wouldn't newborn Jessica and Angela be kinda unstoppable for a while?...I mean I think in the third book SM wrote that the human blood left in newborn bodies after the change would cause them to be bezurk for the next year?...also the vegetarian diet wouldn't appeal to them so quickly (apart from Bella but she knew what to expect)
| Guest chapter 18 . 5/6/2013
If memory serves Christi changed the newborns in New Moon...I've only read 'The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner' once
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/6/2013
I cant be the only one who would have prefered if Twilight had gone in the Bellice direction ;)
| Wispenq chapter 23 . 4/13/2013
Really great story! :)
| Eevee55555 chapter 23 . 4/9/2013
This story was brilliant. This is a great example of a "what if" story between Alice and Bella :)
| justareader21 chapter 12 . 6/6/2012
Love the story. Seriously hate the underline in this chapter and the other one and any more that may be underlined for no apparent reason.
| esmerosebud chapter 23 . 7/17/2011
bestest chapter ever!
| samaramorgane chapter 23 . 5/13/2011
Let see,first I must admit that don't really like stories when they claim to love it each when they say they love each other when they had know each other for like a day!It's not really realistic!You can't exactly be in love with someone that you barely!Then again,that might just be me!Secondly,I found it interresting that you had made a vampire Angela and Jessica!It's not something that I have read many times so that's cool!
Let's say that in general was alright!It wasn't the best that I have read but nice!
| Mechconstrictor chapter 23 . 4/1/2011
Pretty good story. There were mistakes that only slightly distract from the story. Hope you keep on writing. Will there be another part to this?
| chickielover chapter 23 . 3/29/2011
Dude, awesome story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Zippy Saboteur chapter 2 . 3/2/2011
What's the reason the last parts of this chapter are underlined? I don't see anything that would need some sort of special type like italics/bold/underlined and it wasn't explained. It was kind of distracting for that whole section to be underlined for what seems like no reason.
| irishjedi4life chapter 23 . 3/1/2011
Wow love this story I like how quick pace yet just right for the two of them. I do wish there was more alone time between the 2 of them :p
| sunalwayshines chapter 15 . 2/27/2011
Oh and minus the random I after "like" in my previous review of chap 23. Am a wee bit sleepeh as it's about 3 am here (: