|Reviews for Percy Jackson 6 The War of The Gods|
| SaradocCraver101 chapter 2 . 12/20/2010
I love it and please update as soon as you can. _
| Katherine chapter 2 . 12/31/2009
This is a pretty good story, but I have a few comments.
First: Percy dissolved the pact of the Big Three. It's right in there with his wishes, along with the fact that cabins will be built for ALL the gods, including Hades.
Second: It is very, very hard (for me at least, and I'm sure I'm not the only one) to read stories with long paragraphs. It's much harder to follow the plot of the story. I'm talking longer than four lines, and even four lines is a little much. That measurement is (obviously) not exact because everybody has different size computers. But you get the idea: please try to break up the paragraphs. At the very least, you need to break it up in between different people talking.
Anyway, keep on writing. Good story so far, I hope you one day complete it. :)
| chad001 chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
Um... don't know if you remember this, but part of Percy's wish from TLO was no more Pact of the Big Three, oh and that Hades gets a cabin... so there shouldn't be a war about it... excellent story otherwise, good job.
| The Foreseer of Avalon chapter 2 . 6/10/2009
interesting. could get better.
| The New Ace of Spies chapter 2 . 6/10/2009
Horrible grammar, spelling, occ.
It goes by way too fast, you should try to add more emotion and details. LOTS of more details. And the Achilles Curse can't just leave like that unless he hurts a certain part of Percy's body.
Plus, the pact was broken so Zeus and Poseidon shouldn't be angry.
If Aisha Sheva finds this she'll flame you ten times worse than me.
| afallenheart chapter 2 . 6/9/2009
Come on, come on, write the next chapter already!
| Valeri chapter 2 . 6/9/2009
This story is full of suspense. Please write more!
| jacob1141 chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
It is really good good writing keep it up
| silvertrident chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
LOVE IT! Its AWESOME! please update soon!
| sjdhsjhd chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
...have you even read The Last Olympian? I'm sorry, but the economy of PQ fandom is bad enough without stories by authors who barely skimmed the pages of The Last Olympian, and then try to write a story about it...
| Zoe Nightshade chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
This needs much more emotion.