Reviews for Dawn Of A New Age
darkfinder chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
to bad we don't what the minbari think here .
corwinargentusyahoo.com chapter 4 . 7/22/2011
Nice job on all 4 sections. Pretty compelling stuff. Are there plans to do any more? As a big fan of both B5 & bolos, I would love to read more!
Kent Walls chapter 4 . 6/20/2011
I am picky an have decided to honor the best cross over idea with my first , very first complaint here...

Why is there not more..

tog want more NOW!

lmeao... I think it is beautiful... keep going
Rhavis chapter 4 . 6/12/2011
Continue please!
F-14 Tomcat Lover chapter 4 . 5/8/2011
One word: OVERKILL!

So... when's the next chapter?

Sincerely,

F-14 Tomcat Lover

"The Big Cat is on the Prowl."
ShadowCub chapter 4 . 5/5/2011
The vorlons shouldn't be allowed witin a inch of a bolo.

And someone behind the scenes is making humans shoot themselves in the foot with the anti bolo crap.
shadowwriter01 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
A very interesting story idea. Another time anomaly in babylon 5 beside war without end.

A little thing however, your german is terrible.

The term "dieses" is third person and never used for persons.

The word "Engagiert" means hired in german, not engaged.

Correct would the sentence be:

Hier ist Bolo Das Afrika Korps. Ich habe Feindkontakt.

Anyway, a very good story.
Robert chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
Might atually have to read Laumer. Another crossover that would really be fun would be Stephen Amers Berry Biofab series. That have a superweapon sitting on the moon. Twenty miles of Battlesteel called a Symbiotechnic Dreadnaught aka a Mindslaver.
wmwhitewolf chapter 4 . 8/30/2010
Always thought that B5 would of been better if it had AI's like this
Eldagar chapter 4 . 8/13/2010
Great story, I sincerely hope you continue it to its conclusion.
MarisAresyahoo.com chapter 4 . 7/25/2010
This story is truly awesome. I don't normally go for crossovers with stories I don't know but the whole bolo thing is pretty simple to understand. I sincerely thank you for your wonderful writing that just makes this story stand out and work in a way few can. I hope with all hope that you can find it in your heart to finish this story at some point in the future. Thank you most sincerely Scott A.K.A. MarisAres
jaxomj chapter 4 . 4/14/2010
Very nice story.

As to your last note in chapter 4, it brought to mind this little exchange in a star trek convention panel.

"How do the Heisenberg compensators work?"

"Very well, thank you for asking."

Clearly, the hybrid gun works very well, too.
sg07 chapter 4 . 3/3/2010
Och! This is a bloody good story. Ye might want ta watch those 200 megaton per second blasts though. They give me gas.

I think you should rename Hamish to "Scotty". It sounds more appopropriate...don't ye lad? Jolly good story! No suggestions at all.
The Hidden Sith chapter 3 . 1/26/2010
Good story, i have enjoyed it so far. Update soon!
Alexander Dregon chapter 4 . 11/29/2009
Excellent story. The ships are refreshingly powerful. will be waiting for your next installment. Keep up the good work.
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