Reviews for If You Could Read My Mind
2old4fanfic chapter 28 . 3/11/2014
Planet Blue sent me. I've been lurking, but I had to comment on this chapter. Too often in fanfic Edward says 'I love you' and everything is perfect! I like your take, which is a lot closer to what would happen in the real world
Guest chapter 12 . 3/7/2014
why is bella keep giving in to edward? srsly? in every freaking story i read, bella is always takes edward back so easily. ugh
he's an asshole. she should make him pay for all the things he did. make him suffer. bahahahahahaaa I always do that to my ex makes them regret their mistakes *evil grin
maphie chapter 24 . 2/22/2014
This is just too much. Jessica who told Edward's secret is living the life that should have been Bella's and Charlie is a massive drunk who can't get his shit together. I'm not sure where this is going but I'll stick around for a bit more.
romycullen chapter 37 . 2/2/2014
but, wasn't she sterile? I'm confused...
my own hell chapter 36 . 1/17/2014
l hate u very much right now after 36 chapter of going to hell and back after being emotionly ready that he is having a baby with jess u revel at the end it is n't his i am hitting u with tomato right in the face now. i am like bella sad i liked your story but i didn't like the end i mean u dropped hints about it but i am like bella though this was second chance for her then to be ribbed from her again that is just cruel i know this is a happy end i guess you kind of sucker punch me
dasjdasd chapter 4 . 1/10/2014
OH SHIT THIS IS HEATIN' UP.
jus2read chapter 39 . 1/6/2014
Aaww love this story! Short, sweet and wonderful :) 3
xxx
Ailee H chapter 37 . 12/23/2013
All I can say is: AMAZING. I was never ever bored in any of the chapters. Other stories have no twists and turns but yours did. Unbelievable! I am so thankful that Bella and Jessica maintained a friendship and that Jessica and Tyler were together. And that Bella and Edward now have a baby! Yay! Eddie must be big now. I'm really thankful that you shared this with us, definitely a new favorite of mine. Now for the outtakes! :-)
Ailee H chapter 36 . 12/23/2013
So happy that it's not Edward's but I wish Jessica will handle the motherhood well (an outtake perhaps?). Yay, epilogue next! I love you for this! And they're going to New York. :-) I seriously thought they won't make it, and that they'd break up and meet 5 years or so in the future in New York and then get back together. But they did it. They made it. And I love it.
Ailee H chapter 33 . 12/23/2013
I would eventually forgive him but not that quick. I'm a softie and I tend to overreact. Bella is mature and handled the situation better than myself if I am ever put in her shoes. Kudos to her!
Ailee H chapter 30 . 12/23/2013
They are just too cute!
Ailee H chapter 28 . 12/23/2013
I think they need that break. I mean, the world is closing down on them as it is. So yeah, I'm sad but they needed it. It might be the thing that may save their relationship.
Ailee H chapter 27 . 12/23/2013
Oh god. My heart hurts. Well, Edward did cheat on Jessica too. Something happened between and Edward and Bella while Edward was still with Jessica. And the timing is so wrong for Edward and Bella. I know they are strong but just like what Bella said, it's poisonous. Sad to say it, but it is. Sigh, hope they get their happy ending.
Ailee H chapter 23 . 12/23/2013
This hurts.
Ailee H chapter 20 . 12/23/2013
How will Ed tell about Jess? Damn this really going to be one hell of a ride.
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