|Reviews for If You Could Read My Mind|
| sexyalex chapter 37 . 4/9/2012
That ending left me in tears...happy tears. So glad everything worked out for them and jessica too. Great job on this story.
| lislar chapter 37 . 4/8/2012
Thank you for the story. I enjoyed it so much!
| sabiga808 chapter 37 . 4/6/2012
I really enjoyed reading this story... I couldnt stop reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
| Hushi Taloa chapter 28 . 4/2/2012
Where did all Edward's Dom crap come from? Esme keeps thinking of her "widdle boy," and Edward is spanking Bells and telling her what to do and that she belongs to him. Is this just his insecurity busting out all over the place?
Thank you for writing.
| Hushi Taloa chapter 27 . 4/2/2012
No, no, no! This is just day one of the news being out, Bella. You're already feeling like this? That does not argue for fair skies ahead.
Thank you for writing.
| Hushi Taloa chapter 24 . 4/2/2012
I have just one question for Edward. Forget pregnancy scares, dude. You ever hear of HIV and all the other assorted STDs out there? Wrap it, buddy, for your own health and - hey - Bella's health. I don't know how many people you've shtupped, or how many Jessica has, but your daddy should have taught you better. Who knows what you've exposed Bella to, now?
AARRGGHH! Teenagers always think they're freakin' bulletproof!
| Hushi Taloa chapter 22 . 4/2/2012
Loved, LOVED this paragraph:
"Esme pressed a kiss to her husband's cheek and felt the warmth of his breath whisper across her cheek as he sighed. She would have to be careful, now. Too many hearts had been placed in her hands and it would be tricky business to make sure none of them were broken."
Esme: the ultimate carer. Mama will make it all better for everyone. *sigh*
| APL chapter 37 . 3/31/2012
ahhhhh gotta love the angst. thanks for the story, definitely enjoyed it!
| Flora Mile chapter 28 . 3/2/2012
really, is there ever going to be a break for these two.
Sometimes I just feel like saying be done with it. break up, leave each other alone, and stay out of each other's way.
I have an idea, seeing they have had a mountain of crap piled on to their shoulders, I have and idea, kill one of them off... that way they put the final nail in the coffin.
Sorry, but enough with the anxiety.
| Cherrysinger chapter 5 . 2/18/2012
He's not hot...he's an idiot! Although he did have the decency not to go all the way with Bella.
| irelandk chapter 39 . 2/15/2012
| Jaygm chapter 37 . 2/4/2012
Awesome, awesome story! There was so much angst, but that is what makes the ending that much sweeter. These two persevered through an awful lot of sh*t and came out so well in the end. Brought tears to my eyes- again!
| Jaygm chapter 36 . 2/4/2012
2nd time reading this! Fantastic story. Lots and lots of angst but hopefully a HEA for these two.
| saintfudge chapter 39 . 1/26/2012
thanks for sharing a great story -
| Daintress chapter 37 . 1/10/2012
This has been a really lovely story. :) Thanks for sharing it!