|Reviews for If You Could Read My Mind|
| janiedoe12 chapter 5 . 6/18/2009
omg can't wait for the next one...I'm so confused as to what could have happened.
| ebonyeyez1 chapter 5 . 6/18/2009
I can't wait to see what major crap went down between those two, to have him act like that.
| Viola Cornuta chapter 5 . 6/18/2009
ouch, that's gonna leave a mark
| justxxwicked chapter 5 . 6/18/2009
ugh, edward's a douche. WTF? poor bella. :( can't wait for the next chapter! :)
| Bammers chapter 5 . 6/18/2009
edward lied he did not do what he said which means he has feelings that doesn't want to admit update soon thanks...
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/18/2009
Damn, this story owns me. Something about angry pissed off Edward is just plain hot. He is such an asshole, and I'm torn between hating him and feeling sorry for him.
I can't log onto Twilighted forums until I get approved by admin, but once I do I'll be joining the topic!
| coryoplayer chapter 4 . 6/18/2009
Great start and I always need more!
| pixiekat7 chapter 4 . 6/18/2009
SWEET HELL that was intense! Words, I need to find the words! I cannot for the life of me figure out how the hell he can be so furious! I can't imagine Bella could actually do anything that could make him that mad...um, no, wait, mini epiphany (maybe) Did they get "caught" by Charlie? I can kinda see it, because if that happened Edward would be in a world of trouble on so many levels. This Edward scares me...a lot. I'm still too stunned at Edward's behavior to review the rest of the chapter. My head is full of questions!
And what could have happened to Charlie to make him become a shadow of himself & start drinking? Maybe something to do with Jake...Gah! My head is spinning!
Luna, please don't give up...I feel like you have an amazing story here...let it out. I promise I'll be on the edge of my seat waiting to read(&review). Love & hugs
| pixiekat7 chapter 3 . 6/18/2009
Jeez I adore Emmett, he's just too much! Hopping over his desk to hug Bella right in the middle of class, so perfect, so Emmett! And so it begins, Mr Surlypants or Surlyward if you will, is gonna "try" to ignore Bella...yo Edward let me know how that works out for you, ok?(*smirks* that's so not gonna work).
Mike & Eric - "Forks Dorks" spot on, btw. Angela is an angel, she'w always there for Bella, no matter what. We should all have an Angel to count on.
Poor broken hearted Bella, she'll try her best to avoid Surlyward but I have a feeling that's not gonna work out for her either. As to how and why Surlyward broke her heart well how something like this sound? We know they met at the shack so I'm thinking they spent a lot of time there together (possible being "frisky -ish") without anyone knowing about it. And when the time came for Edward to actually acknowledge Bella(& a possible relationship) he chose to act like she didn't mean anything to him. Thus Bella leaves Forks, refusing to return until Renee and/or Charlie forces her to. So what do yo thisnk? Am I even remotely close? Let me know.
Love & hugs!
| pixiekat7 chapter 2 . 6/18/2009
Damn right you should continue!
Emmett & Jazz are their usual awesome selves & I love them, but Edward...wow, Mr. Surlypants & with Jessica ew, just ew. But I'll let that slide for now.
Well written(as is everything you write) & fun to read!
| pixiekat7 chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Luna, I've got to let you know that by just posting those lyrics I'm yours for wherever you take me in this story. If You Could Read My Mind is one of my all-time favorite songs period!
Love & hugz
| LindyP chapter 4 . 6/18/2009
You have writers block? Damn, I sure as hell couldn't tell! This story is shaping up to be really good! I am looking forward to the party-hopefully Bella will look so hot that Edward will be eating his words. Maybe a dash of Jake to shake things up? And I am also DYING to know what happened when Bella left Forks 4 years earlier? It must have been really bad...
| EdwardsBloodType chapter 4 . 6/18/2009
This is so good. I am DYING to know what their issue is and what all the hostility is about.
Though I feel like he is threatening to rape her, I assume that isn't your intention, it's still very hot and makes all my girlie parts tingle!
BTW, my lovely friend SuzyQ just sent me the teaser as well as the shower scene from Anticipation and it gave me chills. She said this is a must read, so here I am. looking forward to reading more!
| sljones73 chapter 4 . 6/18/2009
Loving it so far! Can't wait for more!
| jessica chapter 4 . 6/18/2009
judging by your latest post i doubt your writers block is that bad:) i reali like your story so far so please update and i really like the mean edward but do you know what i would like even more? flasbacks of what happened to make everybody so distant