|Reviews for Five Mistakes|
| Sviridon chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
It so cute! Oh, please, сan I translate it into Russian? The author point out, of course.
| Allen-kun and Lenalee-chan chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Classic Classic '' Are we there YET ?!
| Yuu3 chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Lol. I really wish you had written more. This is gold! ( sorry, if I sound like some idiot from the 80s )
| mochi1412 chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
ROFL! Cross's reactions were PRICELESS
Make sure you continue to write!
| Reviving-Myths chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
This must be one of the funniest things I have read in a while. LOl
| ani chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
rofl... i can just see Allen wiping out the Sign Language like that!
| Mafia Boss chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
| Crowfether chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
an epic EPIC story!
| myst469 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
I laughed so hard when reading this!
Allen sure got on Cross' nerves
| sacrosanctioned chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
You've just made my day. That's all I have to say.
| winternym chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
LOL! Are we there yet... that's so something Cross wouldn't know how to deal with.
| YenSerenity chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
"Cross fell over Anime-style."
I think I'll try that, next time someone is annoying me!
Great story! I really enjoyed it, along with your other D-Gray Man stories. :)
| p3paula chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Allen gets Cross..
so funny.. XD
| Cat-Tuong chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
XD lol, I remember doing that when I was a little kid, though I'm still kinda a kid XP Loved this part:
"Would God be upset if he shot the kid down with Judgment? The kid was hopeless with everything!
"Yes!" Cross yelled, finally on edge. His fingers twitched as they slowly inched towards where Judgment was tucked away."
Great job, keep it up
| sagittariusleo chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
I love it, great!