Reviews for Five Mistakes
Syek chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Ah, this was definitely funny I was thoroughly entertained.
PleaseDeleteThisFFNAccount chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
This is EPIC! Great job! :]
FallenHope-Angel chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
so cute! i love allen!
Doctor Yok chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
HAHAHAHAHAHA! I loved this! You have a gift for making people fall on the ground laughing! Ah, I never thought that Allen would be that annoying, but I guess seeing as he's, like, eleven...
Wind In Your Whiskers chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Hau~ So cute! I love the way you portrayed Allen (are we there yet?) and Cross... Short and sweet, just the way I like it. I know this review is really short, I don't have time now as I'm late for class... I'm sorry! T-T Ah well, have a great day, and do write more stories, I'd love to read 'em sometime!

~Autumn
Misty Narumi chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
lol

Allen is so cute :3
Kame-tan chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
lol this is to funny!
Fibonacci to Infinity chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Short, but was halarious. You made Allen sound like my little 5 year old cousin! XD
RedLeatherDarkGrey chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Such a cute story

I like this.
addenza chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
XD That was really amusing! I enjoyed reading it!
ForgottenFantasy chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
I love this so much! Nicely written, and hilarious, too! My favorite part was the end, and if he short poor Allen xD
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