Reviews for Hunter Cullen
Victoria chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
It’s a good start you might want to add in more details about the surroundings or emotions since you already have a lot of dialog. You might also consider making Rosalie a little less understanding of the situation. She had a lot of sarcastic undertones and was generally more of a pessimistic bitch about everything. You don’t want to state things too blatantly, like the line where she says ‘our skin sparkles.’ I had a hard time imagining Rosalie saying that, they generally let things fall into place rather than explain them out. Carlisle was really vague as well, wouldn’t he have already herd the conversation and known the status? Just some thoughts and suggestions. - V
Shawn likes Pineapples chapter 10 . 9/2/2009
Yeah, this is a LOT better than the first one...continue!

Shawn likes Pineapples
ilovehunter.jacob chapter 10 . 8/26/2009
This is NO FAIR! PLEASE UPDATE! :D

I love this story. I love this crossover. You've incorperated the stories ery well together. Please update :).
Fullmetal Keybearer chapter 5 . 6/24/2009
very good, Ha two words, no six, seven ,eight! Seriously very good. (eleven)
Fullmetal Keybearer chapter 4 . 6/20/2009
the story is way better than it was last time.
Fullmetal Keybearer chapter 2 . 6/13/2009
Poor, poor, Hunter. He would go years without drinking it then he'd go on a killing spree. Poor, poor, Hunter.
Fullmetal Keybearer chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
Sorry for not reviewing last time this was on. This is better than last time though. and your right about the last part.
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