Reviews for Past Crimes
southampton chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
This is really good.

Are you going to finish it? I hope you do- the story you started most excellent.
Silicon2123 chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
Are you planning on continuing this, because I would definitely read it. Let me rephrase that. PLEASE put up another chapter. I liked this one a lot. I really got into it. You are good at describing.
Data Seeker chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Dear Author

This is an interesting fic. Also, like you, I am not a hundred percent certain about the Carmen Canon since it’s been a while and I only saw a few episodes.

Anyway, the quality is good in many areas; full of narration, dialog, emotion, drama and suspense. In my opinion, you need to add a tiny bit more detail. If you want tips, I'll send them through a private message.

The basic story is interesting, having suspense, drama and emotion.

The wholesome standards are high thus far.

The language is clean; and when Maddy cursed, thanks for not describing the word.

Nothing is suggestively offensive.

No extreme violence (and you were not too descriptive on the gun wounds) or any other vile content.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.

Data Seeker